Question

假設你叫李華,是一名高中生.最近,你在某國外的圖書網站購買了一本圖書,遇到了一些問題.為此,你決定向該公司的服務部進行投訴.主要內容包括：
1.圖書比預計晚到10天

2.圖書出現了缺頁現象

3.希望問題盡快得到解決

注意：

1.詞數100左右；可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

2.信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好，但不計人總詞數。

Dear Sir and Madam,

My name is Li Hua. I am a student of a high school in China.__________________

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__________________________________________________________________Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

My name is Li Hua. I am a student of a high school in China. I’ve recently bought a book from your website. However, some problems have arisen, which makes me upset. I am writing to complain about them.

First of all, the book I ordered reached me ten days later than expected, which brought me lots of inconvenience. Worse still, when I looked through it, I found that a few pages are missing, which makes me rather disappointed. I know you are a famous book-selling website, but my experience shows that your service needs improvement. I would appreciate it if you can send me another book as soon as possible.

I am looking forward to your early reply.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文。假設你叫李華,是一名高中生.最近,你在某國外的圖書網站購買了一本圖書,遇到了一些問題.為此,你決定向該公司的服務部進行投訴.主要內容包括： 1.圖書比預計晚到10天 2.圖書出現了缺頁現象 3.希望問題盡快得到解決。需要寫的內容已經粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當添加些內容，使文章更充實。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，不能出現文章脫節(jié)問題。一定要給出自己的看法。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型為文章潤色。注意要求的詞數100詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮點說明】However, some problems have arisen, which makes me upset.這里含有一個定語從句。First of all, the book I ordered reached me ten days later than expected, which brought me lots of inconvenience.這里含有一個定語從句。I know you are a famous book-selling website, but my experience shows that your service needs improvement. 這里含有一個賓語從句。

考點：提綱類書面表達