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【題目】以“我最喜愛的音樂形式”為題目寫一篇英語作文，內(nèi)容包括：喜歡的音樂類型，喜歡該音樂的原因，音樂在生活中扮演的角色。100詞左右

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There are many kinds of music ,such as country music, R&B , rock music,classical music and so on. My favorite music is pop music. On the one hand, it is easy to learn, and this knid of music is often about our life, for example, A whole new world, Memory, Country Road and so on. On the other hand,they are very popular among people and they are very interesting and easy to learn. It is also a good way to learn English.

Since I was 12 years old,when I played computer , I always opened the music player to listen pop music.When I listening these pop music . I will feel very realx . So that's way I love pop music best.

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試題分析：以“我最喜愛的音樂形式”為題目寫一篇英語作文，內(nèi)容包括：喜歡的音樂類型，喜歡該音樂的原因，音樂在生活中扮演的角色。100詞左右. 寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫.寫作時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。避免全部使用簡單句。

【亮點說明】On the one hand, it is easy to learn, and this knid of music is often about our life在句中it做形式主語，真正的主語是后面的動詞不定式；On the one hand,…On the other hand句式的巧妙使用，恰到好處，很有章法；It is also a good way to learn English. 在句中it做形式主語，真正的主語是后面的動詞不定式；Since I was 12 years old,when I played computer , I always opened the music player to listen pop music.這句話中Since引導時間狀語從句，和when引導的定語從句完美結(jié)合；When I listening these pop music . I will feel very realx .句中運用了時間狀語從句；So that's way I love pop music best.句中使用了定語從句。