Question

請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。

作為高三學(xué)生的你，最近看了一則公益廣告Family且深有感觸。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)根據(jù)下面的圖寫(xiě)一篇立志學(xué)習(xí)，感恩父母的文章,要求簡(jiǎn)要描述圖片所表達(dá)的內(nèi)容并談?wù)勀愕母惺堋?/p>

注意：不少于120詞，開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

As is vividly shown in the picture, the word family represents three people, who are father, mother and I.

When I was young, father was the most important person in my family.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

As is vividly shown in the picture, the word family represents three people, who are father, mother and I.

When I was young, father was the most important person in my family. My mother took good care of me and protected me from wind and rain. Later I grow up. I take on the responsibility to look after my parents. I realize that the family also means father and mother I love you.

The picture mirrors a common phenomenon, which has aroused our social concern. Undoubtedly, our parents have made a lot of sacrifices. It’s high time we took measures to show gratitude to them.. what’s more, we shouldn’t take our parents’ love for granted. Instead, we are supposed to appreciate it from the bottom of our hearts.

From my point of view, we ought to show our affection to our beloved parents. Now it is time for us to do what we can in return for their hard work. What can we do now is study hard and make progress in our studies. Only in this way can we live up to their expectations and take better care of our aged parents in the future.

【解析】

試題分析：圖畫(huà)作文要求考生根據(jù)所給的寫(xiě)作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開(kāi)寫(xiě)作。因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文中提到一些常見(jiàn)的短語(yǔ)took good care of照顧；what’s more而且；take sth for granted 把某事想當(dāng)然；in return for 作為回報(bào)；The picture mirrors a common phenomenon, which has aroused our social concern這個(gè)句子which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；It’s high time we took measures to show gratitude to them.這個(gè)句子考查到it is time that 從句用 should +動(dòng)詞原形或一般過(guò)去時(shí)；What can we do now is study hard and make progress in our studies.這個(gè)句子考查What can we do now引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句；Only in this way can we live up to their expectations and take better care of our aged parents in the future這個(gè)句子中運(yùn)用到only +狀語(yǔ)+部分倒裝 。

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