8．假如英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．注意：：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞；2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Christine is just one of the girl in my class．I never know much about her except for that she is strange．She doesn't talk many．Her hair is black and purple and she wear black sports shoes．The strange thing is that she wears black sweater all the year round，even on summer．She is，in fact，rather attractively and she never seems to cared what the rest of us think about her．As other classmates，I seldom talk to her with doubt how Christine dresses the way she does．

分析 Christine 只是我班上的一個(gè)女孩，除了她很奇怪外，我對(duì)她了解不多． 她很少說話，她的頭發(fā)是黑紫色的，她穿著黑色的運(yùn)動(dòng)鞋．奇怪的是，一年四季即使是在夏季，她都穿著一件黑色的運(yùn)動(dòng)衫．實(shí)際上，她長(zhǎng)得很迷人，她好像不在乎我們其他人怎么想她．像其他的同學(xué)一樣，我很少帶著疑惑去問Christine為什么要這樣穿衣服．

解答 答案：
Christine is just one of the girl in my class．I never know much 
                                       girls
about her except for  that she is strange．She doesn't talk  many．
                        去掉for                                                  much   
Her hair is black and purple and she wear black sports shoes．
                                                     wears 
The strange thing is that she wears∧black sweater all the year round，
                                                   a
even on  summer．She is，in fact，rather attractively   and she never seems
        in                                                   attractive  
to cared  what the rest of us think about her．As other classmates，I seldom
    care                                                        Like
talk to her with doubt how  Christine dresses the way she does．
                                why

1．girl改為girls    考查名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)      one of..意為：…中之一；其后接可數(shù)名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式；故改為girls
2．去掉for    考查介詞"except for"中的for是介詞，其后應(yīng)接單詞或短語(yǔ)；而"that she is strange"是一個(gè)句子；故去掉for
3．many改為much   考查副詞    本句的意思是：她很少說話；此處用來修飾動(dòng)詞talk；故用副詞much
4．wear改為wears    考查主謂一致以及時(shí)態(tài)    根據(jù)上文使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)可知，本文主要介紹了Christine現(xiàn)在的情況，故此處也應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；由于這里的主語(yǔ)是she，故謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞應(yīng)使用第三人稱單數(shù)形式wears
5．在black之前加a   考查冠詞     此處表示泛指"一件黑色的運(yùn)動(dòng)衫"；由于black首字母的發(fā)音為輔音/b/，故用冠詞a
6．on改為in      考查介詞       在季節(jié)前應(yīng)加介詞in，故改為in
7．a(chǎn)ttractively改為attractive   考查形容詞     此處在句中作表語(yǔ)，說明某人（she）的情況；故用形容詞attractive
8．cared改為care    考查動(dòng)詞    本句的意思是：她好像不在乎我們其他人怎么想她；此處用在動(dòng)詞不定式之后，表達(dá)的是主動(dòng)意義；故用動(dòng)詞原形care
9．As改為L(zhǎng)ike    考查介詞      表示"像…一樣"時(shí)，as之后通常跟從句；like之后接短語(yǔ)或單詞；由于other classmates為短語(yǔ)，故用Like
10．how改為why    考查特殊疑問詞   本句的意思是：像其他的同學(xué)一樣，我很少帶著疑惑去問Christine為什么要這樣穿衣服；how表示方式"如何，怎樣"；故用why"為什么"

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)是集語(yǔ)法知識(shí)與語(yǔ)言技能為一體的綜合性試題，主要考查學(xué)生對(duì)詞匯、語(yǔ)法和語(yǔ)篇三要素的把握能力．錯(cuò)誤類型一般有：缺詞、多詞和錯(cuò)詞．常見的錯(cuò)誤有：1 詞法錯(cuò)誤，主要包括動(dòng)詞、名詞、冠詞、形容詞、副詞、代詞和介詞等詞類誤用、同義詞混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此類試題時(shí)，需要正確分析句子成分，熟練掌握各詞類的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常見句法錯(cuò)誤．通常表現(xiàn)為簡(jiǎn)單句、復(fù)合句以及疑問句、祈使句、感嘆句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句等錯(cuò)誤．解答此類試題時(shí)，需要掌握各類句子的句式結(jié)構(gòu)及意義用法．3 應(yīng)在理解文章大意的前提下，進(jìn)行作答．

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