Question

某英語報(bào)社開展就中學(xué)生可不可以帶手機(jī)上學(xué)的話題討論。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，向該報(bào)編輯寫一封英文信，發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)。

手機(jī)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)	1．便于與父母和朋友聯(lián)系； 2．能增加樂趣。
帶手機(jī)上學(xué)存在的問題	1．上課時(shí)使用手機(jī)干擾教學(xué) 2．用手機(jī)聊天、發(fā)短信費(fèi)時(shí)費(fèi)錢。
建議	1．上課時(shí)不許使用手機(jī)； 2．貴重物品，個(gè)人宜妥善保管。

注意：1．信的開頭己為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2．詞數(shù)；100左右。
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Dear Editor,
I’m a senior two student . I’m writing to tell you my opinion
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Answer 1

Dear Editor: 
　　I’m a senior three student. I’m writing to tell you my opinion on whether middle school students can go to school with mobile phones. I think they can do that. Because students can stay in touch with their friends and family wherever they are. Besides, the mobile phone is a way to have fun. 
However, there are some problems with using mobile phones. The ring of phones can disturb teachers and students in the classroom. Another problem is that some students can spend too much time and money on phone calls and sending messages. 
In conclusion, I suggest students not use phones in the classroom. Also, as it is expensive, the owner should take good care of it 
Yours sincerely, 
Li Hua

解析試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文。某英語報(bào)社開展就中學(xué)生可不可以帶手機(jī)上學(xué)的話題討論。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，向該報(bào)編輯寫一封英文信，發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)。需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當(dāng)添加些內(nèi)容，使文章更充實(shí)。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。一定要給出自己的看法。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型為文章潤色。注意要求的詞數(shù)100詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】I’m writing to tell you my opinion on whether middle school students can go to school with mobile phones.這里含有一個(gè)賓語從句；Another problem is that some students can spend too much time and money on phone calls and sending messages. 這里含有一個(gè)表語從句。
考點(diǎn)：提綱類書面表達(dá)