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20．假如你是榮光中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你偶然看到在你市求學(xué)的美國學(xué)生Tom在網(wǎng)上發(fā)帖，要大家給他推薦一本學(xué)習(xí)漢語的書．你手頭正好有一本合適的書可以借給他．請你給他發(fā)一封電子郵件，要點如下：1．說明寫信原因；2．描述書的情況；3．約定見面時間和地點．注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Tom，
    I'm Li Hua，a student of Rongguang Middle School．Dear Tom，
I'm Li Hua，a student of Rongguang Middle School．I learned quite by chance that you needed a book to improve your Chinese．I happen to have one，which I think might help you．（高分句型一）（說明原因）
The book，entitled New Practical Chinese，is intended for beginners at your level．Not only does it include the basic conversations in our daily life，but it is also a window through which you can get to know Chinese culture and customs．（高分句型二）Edited by three language experts，it is widely used by many foreign learners．（書籍描述）
If it is convenient to you，let's meet at the entrance to Jiangnan Park at 3 p．m．this Sunday．If not，try to find another time that is suitable for both of us．
Yours，
Li Hua
                                                               
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I happen to have one，which I think might help you．恰好我有一本這個書，我想對你可能有會幫助的．
高分句型二：
Not only does it include the basic conversations in our daily life，but it is also a window through which you can get to know Chinese culture and customs．
它不僅包含我們?nèi)粘Ｉ�活中的基本對話，而且它也是你了解中國文化和�?xí)俗的一扇窗．
句型一  which I think might help you 該句是一個由which充當(dāng)關(guān)系代詞的非限制性定語從句，which在句中替代前面的先行詞one，而one指代的是上文中的book
句型二 Not only does it include the basic…but it is also a window…not only…but also..是用來連接并列成分的，當(dāng)其連接并列分句時，not only后的句中要使用部分倒裝，將主語同謂語部分助動詞進(jìn)行位置的交換：does it include the basic此處即為倒裝部分

解答 Dear Tom，
    I'm Li Hua，a student of Rongguang Middle School．I learned quite by chance that you needed a book to improve your Chinese．I happen to have one，which I think might help you．（高分句型一）（說明原因）
    The book，entitled New Practical Chinese，is intended for beginners at your level．Not only does it include the basic conversations in our daily life，but it is also a window through which you can get to know Chinese culture and customs．（高分句型二）Edited by three language experts，it is widely used by many foreign learners．（書籍描述）
    If it is convenient to you，let's meet at the entrance to Jiangnan Park at 3 p．m．this Sunday．If not，try to find another time that is suitable for both of us．
    Yours，
Li Hua

點評 該書面表達(dá)為一封電子郵件，其表述過程中應(yīng)注意用簡潔明了的話將所列舉的要求表述清楚是最為重要的，在圍繞主題的前提下，適當(dāng)發(fā)散思維，可使文章更為表達(dá)明確．