Question

1．假定你校將舉行一個(gè)成人儀式，你將作為代表在儀式上發(fā)言．請(qǐng)你按以下內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)準(zhǔn)備一篇英文發(fā)言稿．
1．過(guò)去對(duì)成年的向往；
2．現(xiàn)在的感受和認(rèn)識(shí)；
3．將來(lái)的目標(biāo)及措施．
參考詞匯：責(zé)任 responsibility
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；
3．發(fā)言稿的開頭與結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
Good morning，everyone！
The topic of my speech today is"thoughts on becoming a grown-up"．
As a child，I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked．
Now I'm a grown-up，but I find things do not go as I expected． Although I can enjoy more freedom，at the same time I realize that being a grown-up not only means this，but also more responsibilities． I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life more meaningful．
To reach the goal，I must first try my best to pass the college entrance examination and enter a good university．、Thank you for your listening．．

Answer 1

分析 本作文為應(yīng)用文，根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容寫一篇在校成人儀式上的發(fā)言稿，屬于提綱作文．時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱以第一人稱為主．重要短語(yǔ)：grow up （成長(zhǎng)），not only …，but also（不但…而且），reach the goal （實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)…），try one's best…（努力做），enter a good university（上好大學(xué)）．

解答 Good morning，everyone!
The topic of my speech today is"Thoughts on becoming a grown-up．"
As a child，I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked．【高分句型】（過(guò)去對(duì)成年的向往）
Now I'm a grown-up，but I find things do not go as I expected．（現(xiàn)在的感受）Although I can enjoy more freedom，at the same time I realize that being a grown-up not only means this，but also more responsibilities．【高分句型】（現(xiàn)在的認(rèn)識(shí)）I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life more meaningful．（將來(lái)的目標(biāo)）
To reach the goal，I must first try my best to pass the college entrance examination and enter a good university．（要采取的措施）
 
 Thank you for your listening．

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