Question

【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下面一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1、 每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞；

2、 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.

One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue（燒烤）. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky— they were looked like rain ! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.

That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity (重力).

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】teach前加 to

【2】come → came

【3】have → having

【4】immediate → immediately

【5】arrows后on → at

【6】Neither → None

【7】was → were

【8】去掉 were 或 looked

【9】but → and

【10】impressive 前a → an

【解析】

【1】teach前加 to 考查動詞的用法。want后跟非謂語動詞做賓語時用動詞不定式，to不能省略

【2】come → came 考查動詞的時態(tài)本文主體時態(tài)是一般過去式，故come改為came

【3】have → having 考查非謂語動詞。前一句已有謂語動詞，have做伴隨狀語，邏輯主語是句子的主語，與邏輯主語是主動關系，且與謂語動詞動作同事進行，故用v-ing形式

【4】immediate → immediately考查副詞。本句中應該使用副詞immediately來修飾謂語動詞jumped，在句中做狀語。故把immediate改為immediately

【5】arrows后on → at 考查介詞。固定搭配shoot..at…不能使用介詞on。at表示瞄準的對方或者方向。故把on改為at

【6】Neither → None 考查代詞。代詞neither表示兩者都不…；而本句中沒有提及兩者，應該是有很多的鳥。故使用none表示三者或者三者以上的全部否定。故把neither改為none

【7】was → were 考查主謂一致。本句的主語是復數(shù)名詞arrows，所以謂語動詞使用復數(shù)形式were。故把was改為were

【8】去掉 were 或 looked考查固定搭配。本句是指箭如雨下，要么使用look like看起來像..；要么使用 be like…像…一 樣。故去掉were或者looked。

【9】but → and 考查連詞。我們四處逃跑，很幸運的是沒有人受傷。根據(jù)上下文語境可知表示并列關系。故把but改為and

【10】impressive 前a → an考查冠詞。后面的形容詞impressive是以元音開始的，所以使用an。故把a改為an

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