Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計(jì)分。

Cherry, whom is about 5 or 6 years old, is my favorite pet. About three years before, Cherry showed up at our house. I have just lost my cat and was very sadly, so I didn’t plan to own another pet. At first, we ignored her. We were getting ready leave for a vacation. My two daughter kept wanting us to keep her and fed her behind my back. Finally I had to tell them if he was still here when we got back, we would keep her. I was sure a dog would move on. Guess what? When we got back from vacation, but the dog was still around. It seemed like an angel had send her to us.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】whom—who

【2】before—ago

【3】sadly—sad

【4】have—had

【5】ready后加to

【6】daughter—daughters

【7】he—she

【8】a—the

【9】去掉but

【10】send—sent

【解析】

【1】whom—who；whom賓格不能做非限制定語從句中的主語，而who可代指人，可做主語。

【2】before—ago；表述一段時(shí)間以前用一段時(shí)間+ago。ago表示“從現(xiàn)在起的若干時(shí)間以前”,意思是“距今……以前”,需和過去時(shí)或過去進(jìn)行時(shí)連用.before泛指“從過去起的若干時(shí)間以前”,意思是 “距過去某時(shí)……以前”“與其……（毋寧）”,常和完成時(shí)連用。,

【3】sadly—sad；根據(jù)句意：我失去了我的貓，我很傷心。修飾主語，用形容詞作表語。

【4】have—had；文章主要講的是過去的事情，故have用過去式。

【5】ready后加to；考察固定短語：be ready to do準(zhǔn)備好做某事。

【6】daughter—daughters；兩個(gè)女兒為復(fù)數(shù)概念，故用daughters。

【7】he—she；句意：最終我不得不告訴她們，當(dāng)我們回來了，她還在這，我們會(huì)繼續(xù)養(yǎng)她。可知這里的她是寵物狗Cherry。前文 we ignored her，暗示了狗狗是母狗。故用she。

【8】a—the；the特制前文所提到的寵物狗。而a是泛指。

【9】去掉but；當(dāng)我們回來的時(shí)候，那只狗仍舊在周圍。文中的轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系不成立，所以去掉but。

【10】send—sent；考查固定句型had done，所以應(yīng)用過去分詞sent。