Question

假設(shè)你是黃山中學(xué)學(xué)生會主席李健。你校將于10月1至2日接待來自瑞士某中學(xué)的學(xué)生訪問團(tuán)。你受學(xué)校委托，負(fù)責(zé)安排他們在黃山市的2天交流參觀活動。請根據(jù)以下提示，用英語給該團(tuán)的領(lǐng)隊Amman先生寫一封電子郵件，介紹活動計劃并簡要說明理由，最后需征求對方意見。
10月1日：上午參觀學(xué)校，與學(xué)校學(xué)生座談（學(xué)校生活、文化差異等）；
中午與我校學(xué)生共同進(jìn)餐（ 自助形式，以中式菜肴為主）；
下午與我校學(xué)生進(jìn)行友誼籃球賽；
10月2日： 游覽黃山(中國名山，2002年與瑞士少女峰結(jié)為姊妹山)。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100-120；
可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫；
信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：瑞士 Switzerland； 少女峰Jungfrau； 姊妹山twin-mountain
Dear Mr. Amman,
I am Li Jian, chairman of the Student Union, of Huangshan High School.
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Answer 1

Dear Mr. Amman,
I am Li Jian, chairman of the Student Union, from Huangshan High School. Glad to know that your delegation will visit our school on October 1st and 2nd, and I am responsible for arranging your activities here. My plan is as follows:
On the morning of October 1st, we will show you around the school. Then a discussion will be held, which may cover the topics of school life, cultural differences, and etc, aiming to improve the mutual understanding. At noon, we will have a buffet lunch in the school dining room. To help you know more about our traditional customs and culture, we will be preparing some typical Chinese foods (rice, dumplings and noodles). The afternoon will see a friendly basketball match.
The following day (October 2nd) will be an excursion day. Your delegation will go to the Yellow Mountain, one of the most famous scenic spots in China, which also enjoys the twin-mountain relationship with Jungfrau--- Top of Europe in Switzerland.
How do you like the proposal? If you have some specific ideas, we will be glad to take them into consideration to make your trip more interesting and impressive!
Looking forward to your early reply!
Best wishes
Sincerely
Li Jian

解析試題分析：這是一篇應(yīng)用文中的書信，主要是介紹2天交流參觀活動的行程。以將來時的時間為主。我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。
考點：提綱類作文
點評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點，理解要點要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。