Question

假設(shè)你是黃山中學(xué)學(xué)生會(huì)主席李健。你校將于10月1至2日接待來自瑞士某中學(xué)的學(xué)生訪問團(tuán)。你受學(xué)校委托，負(fù)責(zé)安排他們在黃山市的2天交流參觀活動(dòng)。請根據(jù)以下提示，用英語給該團(tuán)的領(lǐng)隊(duì)Amman先生寫一封電子郵件，介紹活動(dòng)計(jì)劃并簡要說明理由，最后需征求對方意見。
10月1日：上午參觀學(xué)校，與學(xué)校學(xué)生座談（學(xué)校生活、文化差異等）；
中午與我校學(xué)生共同進(jìn)餐（ 自助形式，以中式菜肴為主）；
下午與我校學(xué)生進(jìn)行友誼籃球賽；
10月2日： 游覽黃山(中國名山，2002年與瑞士少女峰結(jié)為姊妹山)。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100-120；
1.   可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；
2.  信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：瑞士 Switzerland； 少女峰Jungfrau； 姊妹山twin-mountain
Dear Mr. Amman,
I am Li Jian, chairman of the Student Union, of Huangshan High School.
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Answer 1

Dear Mr. Amman,
I am Li Jian, chairman of the Student Union, from Huangshan High School. Glad to know that your delegation will visit our school on October 1^st and 2^nd, and I am responsible for arranging your activities here. My plan is as follows:
On the morning of October 1^st, we will show you around the school. Then a discussion will be held, which may cover the topics of school life, cultural differences, and etc, aiming to improve the mutual understanding. At noon, we will have a buffet lunch in the school dining room. To help you know more about our traditional customs and culture, we will be preparing some typical Chinese foods (rice, dumplings and noodles). The afternoon will see a friendly basketball match.
The following day (October 2^nd) will be an excursion day. Your delegation will go to the Yellow Mountain, one of the most famous scenic spots in China, which also enjoys the twin-mountain relationship with Jungfrau--- Top of Europe in Switzerland.
How do you like the proposal? If you have some specific ideas, we will be glad to take them into consideration to make your trip more interesting and impressive!
Looking forward to your early reply!
Best wishes
Sincerely
Li Jian

解析試題分析：這是一封書信，介紹在黃山市的2天交流參觀活動(dòng)，寫的時(shí)候要注意書信的格式，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)給出了一個(gè)提綱，分別按日期介紹活動(dòng)安排，要以時(shí)間為順序清楚的表達(dá)，時(shí)態(tài)以一般將來時(shí)為主，要選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達(dá)文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實(shí)現(xiàn)同樣的目的。Your delegation will go to the Yellow Mountain, one of the most famous scenic spots in China, which also enjoys the twin-mountain relationship with Jungfrau--- Top of Europe in Switzerland.
這句話比較長，使用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，用的很好，還要使用合適的連接詞來連接各要點(diǎn)，使文章成為一個(gè)整體。
考點(diǎn)：考查書信類作文
點(diǎn)評：除了注意書信的格式，表達(dá)方式的選擇和要點(diǎn)的完備也很重要，要點(diǎn)不能有遺漏或者省略。也不能按照表格寫出提綱式，所以在寫作的時(shí)候要變換句式，同時(shí)要注意因?yàn)槭青]件要寫得親切直白。