Question

【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換批改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中至多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，在下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，在下面寫(xiě)出改正后的詞。

注意：

1. 每次錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

A young man called low-Carbon Brother become a hit on the Internet in 2011. He suggests to living a low-carbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reducing carbon dioxide in the air. For example, she always picks up some waste paper on the street or uses the blank side to write something. While he is watching TV, he always turns up the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. Therefore, he goes to work by bike instead of driving. Some people think what he is doing is just a show. No one can live such a simply life with so many modern invention around us. As far as I am concerned, I am strongly in support his idea and his behavior. Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, but he at least can enjoy a healthy life.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】become →became

【2】去掉to

【3】reducing→reduce

【4】she →he

【5】up →down

【6】Therefore→Besides

【7】simply →simple

【8】invention→inventions

【9】加of

【10】去掉but

【解析】

試題分析：一個(gè)低碳環(huán)保主義者引起了人們的注意，他有很多環(huán)保的做法，如：一張紙正反兩面都用、看電視時(shí)調(diào)低屏幕亮度、騎自行車上班等。

【1】become →became 考查時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)后面的時(shí)態(tài)in 2011可知是過(guò)去時(shí)，用became。

【2】去掉to 考查介詞。Suggest doing ;suggest sb to do固定搭配，建議做某事，所以去掉to 。

【3】reducing→reduce 考查動(dòng)詞。Help (to)do幫助做某事，有助于某事，用reduce。

【4】she →he 考查代詞。根據(jù)A young man可知主人公是男的，故he 。

【5】up →down考查介詞和對(duì)文章的理解。要環(huán)保節(jié)約的做法應(yīng)該是turn down調(diào)低，而不是turn up 調(diào)高，用down。

【6】Therefore→Besides考查連詞。另外的環(huán)保做法，是補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明上文的做法，而不是結(jié)果，用Besides。

【7】simply →simple考查形容詞。修飾名詞life用形容詞，用simple 。

【8】invention→inventions 考查單復(fù)數(shù)。so many提示用復(fù)數(shù)名詞，且invention可數(shù)，用inventions。

【9】加of 考查介詞。In support of 介詞短語(yǔ)，支持，贊成，若直接用support則不用加介詞 ，所以加of。

【10】去掉but 考查連詞。前文已經(jīng)有連詞although了，后句不應(yīng)該還用介詞，所以去掉but。