Question

【題目】假如你校要舉辦一次主題為“How to communicate with friends”的英語演講比賽，請你用英語寫一篇演講稿。要點如下：

尊重并信任朋友，作為回報，他們也會信賴你。

常與朋友聊天，增強相互了解。

換位思考問題，體會別人所想，找出合適的交流方式。

誠懇與體貼在溝通中非常重要。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)：100字左右；

2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3．參考詞匯：

換位思考 put oneself in sb’s shoes consideration 考慮周到，體貼

作為回報 in return

[寫作要求]

1．只能使用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容；

2．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]

句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。

Hello, everyone, I’d like to share my ideas about the topic of communicating with our friends.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Hello, everyone, I’d like to share my ideas about the topic of communicating with our friends. In the first place not only should we show respect for our friends but also it is necessary to trust them. With respect and trust given to them, they in return will certainly keep you whoever can be relied on, deepening your communication in some ways. Moreover, it’s good to have a chat with our friends at times, which will strengthen mutual understanding. Of course what we should pay more attention to is to put ourselves in their shoes, experiencing what they are thinking of and find out an appropriate way to communicate better. In one word, sincerity and consideration counts to make communication more smooth between our friends and us.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇演講稿，主題是：How to communicate with our friends。文章的要點基本上都給了出來，1. 尊重并信任朋友，作為回報，他們也會信賴你2.常與朋友聊天，增強相互了解。3.換位思考問題，體會別人所想，找出合適的交流方式。4.誠懇與體貼在溝通中非常重要。考生只需要翻譯即可，難度不大，在寫作的時候選擇詞匯要選擇相對高級的詞匯，也要運用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。注意改變文章的樣式。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實現(xiàn)同樣的目的。要使用合適的連接詞來連接各要點，使文章成為一個整體。演講稿作文的關(guān)鍵在于表達方式的選擇和要點不能有遺漏或者省略。語言要符合英語習(xí)慣，簡潔條理要清楚，還要適當(dāng)變換句式，不能讓演講稿單調(diào)乏味。

【亮點說明】本篇范文要點全面，語言流暢自然，使用五句話表達了所有內(nèi)容，符合題目要求。文中使用了一些連接詞使得文章內(nèi)容銜接，語言連貫。如moreover, in one word, put sb in the shoe.還有主語從句，what we should pay more attention to is to put ourselves in their shoes,定語從句which will strengthen mutual understanding.非謂語短語和介詞短語With respect and trust given to them,等。