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根據以下所給的信息，介紹蘋果公司的最新產品蘋果智能手表。

產品名稱：蘋果牌智能手表

外形特點：它被視為戴在手腕上的小型計算機, 采用了藍寶石屏幕與Force Touch觸摸技術，有銀色、金色、紅色和白色等多種顏色供選擇。

功能：可以發(fā)郵件、短信、支付網購產品和導航；智能手表還可以監(jiān)控佩戴者的健康狀況和強壯程度。如果想使用智能手表的大部分功能，最好與iPhone同時使用。

價格：＄349~＄10,000

購買信息：4月10號接受預定，4月24號在美國及其他8個國家出售。

參考詞匯：藍寶石屏幕 Sapphire screen 預定 pre-order 導航navigation services

【寫作要求】

只能用5個句子表達全部內容。

【評分標準】

句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章連貫。

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【答案】

Apple Watch, a newly launched product by the Apple Company, is a wrist-top micro-computer with a Sapphire display integrating Force Touch technology, and a range of colours from silver, golden, red to white for customers to choose from. At the touch of the screen, not only would you be able to send e-mails or messages, but also pay for online goods and enjoy the navigation services. In addition, this gadget (small device) can monitor the customer’s health and fitness. If you want to make the best of Apple Watch applications, you are recommended to own an iPhone. You can place an order for Apple Watch on April 10, which is expected to be put on the market in the United States and eight other countries on April 24, with prices between $349 and $10000.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于提綱類寫作，要求我們就題目中所給內容寫一段作文。此篇文章中要點已給出，并且題目要求只能用五個句子完成寫作，于是不難觀察發(fā)現(xiàn)題目中所給出的要點也只有五條，所以可以針對每一條信息寫一句話，完成寫作。題中已經將寫作中可能遇到的難詞羅列出來，在寫的時候可以直接套用。此篇寫作與其他提綱類寫作不同，限定了用5句話，所以不能像以往的寫作一樣擴展太多。要注意在寫作的時候要讀懂題目中想要表達的意思，并且盡量不要讓句子太過復雜和繁瑣。另外寫作時切記需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。同時在寫作時要注意使用高級的詞匯與高級的句型，不要遺漏任何的要點，同時要使用合適的連接詞來連接整個文章，使文章更有條理性。

【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，用了很多并列結構以及從句將長篇內容概括成五個句子，例如第一句Apple Watch, a newly launched product by the Apple Company, is a wrist-top micro-computer with a Sapphire display integrating Force Touch technology, and a range of colours from silver, golden, red to white for customers to choose from，用一個長復雜句將題中意思概括，為文章增色不少。

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