16.假定你是李華.下周一你因故不能上外教Tom的課,打算向他請(qǐng)假.請(qǐng)給外教Tom寫(xiě)一封請(qǐng)假條,內(nèi)容包括:
1.理由及歉意;                  
2.彌補(bǔ)措施.
注意:l.詞數(shù) 80左右;     
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫.
Dear Tom,
I'm awfully sorry that I love to ask for a leave of absence from your Spoken English course next Monday for my personal reason.【高分句型一】
A long-time-no-see friend from South China is coming to ace me next week.so I'm supposed so meet him at the railway station for it is the first time for him to travel to our city.(表原因)Words can't convey my apology and pity that I'll have to miss your interesting data.(表歉意)To make up for the missed class.I wonder if it's acceptable.you if I ask one classmate to have your class recorded for me.(彌補(bǔ)措施)
I'd appreciate it if you could approve my request for a leave.【高分句型二】
Yours.
Li Hua.

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類(lèi)作文,根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華.下周一你因故不能上外教Tom的課,打算向他請(qǐng)假.請(qǐng)給外教Tom寫(xiě)一封請(qǐng)假條,內(nèi)容包括.寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn):理由及歉意;彌補(bǔ)措施.    2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ),按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě).本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài).4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):
句型一:
 I'm awfully sorry that I love to ask for a leave of absence from your Spoken English course next Monday for my personal reason."我非常抱歉,因?yàn)槲覀(gè)人原因,在下個(gè)星期一,你的英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)課上,我想請(qǐng)假."I'm awfully sorry that 表示"我非常抱歉…".
句型二:
I'd appreciate it if you could approve my request for a leave."如果你能批準(zhǔn)我請(qǐng)假的請(qǐng)求,我將不勝感激."I'd appreciate it if 表示"如果…我將非常感謝".

解答 Dear Tom,
       I'm awfully sorry that I love to ask for a leave of absence from your Spoken English course next Monday for my personal reason.【高分句型一】
       A long-time-no-see friend from South China is coming to ace me next week.so I'm supposed so meet him at the railway station for it is the first time for him to travel to our city.(表原因)Words can't convey my apology and pity that I'll have to miss your interesting data.(表歉意)To make up for the missed class.I wonder if it's acceptable.you if I ask one classmate to have your class recorded for me.(彌補(bǔ)措施)
       I'd appreciate it if you could approve my request for a leave.【高分句型二】
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours.
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力.在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子;二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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