【題目】現(xiàn)在,很多中學(xué)生每天長(zhǎng)時(shí)間用耳機(jī)聽音樂、學(xué)英語。你的英語筆友李平也是如此。最近他在來信中提到感覺頭痛、注意力不集中、記憶力減退。請(qǐng)你就此回信談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)和建議。

寫作要點(diǎn):

1.簡(jiǎn)述過度使用耳機(jī)的現(xiàn)象;

2.分析過度使用耳機(jī)的危害;(至少兩點(diǎn))

3.提出你的建議。(至少兩條)

注意:

1.要點(diǎn)齊全,可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;

2.字?jǐn)?shù)120左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

3.可能用到的詞匯:

過度使用耳機(jī)overuse earphone; 注意力不集中l(wèi)ess concentration; 記憶力減退bad memory

Dear Li Ping,

I received your letter yesterday

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Best wishes.

Lin Tao

【答案】

Dear Li Ping,

I received your letter yesterday. Nowadays many students listen to music and learn English with earphones.

As for your trouble with ears and bad memory, I’m afraid you spend too much time listening with earphones. In fact, listening to music while doing your lessons may result in less concentration on your study. Besides, the overuse of earphones does harm to your hearing.

There are many ways we can enjoy music and learn English. For instance, a recorder or a radio may be a good choice. However, if you do need to use an earphone, you should rest your ears for at least ten minutes every hour but do not use it more than 2 hours a day. I hope things will get better soon.

Best wishes.

Lin Tao

【解析】

試題分析:現(xiàn)在,很多中學(xué)生每天長(zhǎng)時(shí)間用耳機(jī)聽音樂、學(xué)英語。你的英語筆友李平也是如此。最近他在來信中提到感覺頭痛、注意力不集中、記憶力減退。請(qǐng)你就此回信談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)和建議。

寫作要點(diǎn):1.簡(jiǎn)述過度使用耳機(jī)的現(xiàn)象;2.分析過度使用耳機(jī)的危害;(至少兩點(diǎn))3.提出你的建議。(至少兩條)寫作時(shí)不要逐句翻譯,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫同時(shí)要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫全,語句通順,同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞,同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子為文章增色添彩。注意:1.要點(diǎn)齊全,可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;2.字?jǐn)?shù)120左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】I have learned that you are looking for an English editor and I am interested in it.賓語從句和并列舉的結(jié)合;I have a good command of both written and spoken English, so it will be easy work for me to deal with all kinds of English papers.句中運(yùn)用了so引導(dǎo)的并列句;Besides, I have good computer skills, which plays an important role in editing.非限制性定語從句在句中出現(xiàn);I am sure you will have a good time working with me.賓語從句和固定句式完美結(jié)合;All in all, I believe I am the right person for the job.固定詞組和賓語從句巧妙結(jié)合;I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance此句式為文章增色,顯得文章很有檔次。

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