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17．假如你叫李華，你校英語報社開辟了"Reader's Voice"專欄，邀請讀者針對一些熱點問題發(fā)表自己的看法．請你以Should high school students study abroad during the holidays？為題，寫一篇英語短文投稿．主要內(nèi)容包括：
1．分析高中生出國游學的利弊；
2．闡述你對此現(xiàn)象的看法．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右．開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Should high school students study abroad during the holidays？
In recent years more and more high school students study abroad during the holidays．答案如下．

Answer 1

分析 本文為議論文寫作．人稱以第一人稱為主，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時．寫作要點為：1．分析高中生出國游學的利弊；2．闡述你對此現(xiàn)象的看法．
重要詞匯：study abroad （出國留學）；be beneficial to（有益于）；in addition（另外，此外）；communication skills（交際能力，溝通能力）；prefer A to B（A與B相比，更喜歡A）；broaden ome's horizon（開闊某人的視野）； support（支持）
高分句型：1．In addition，it is a good chance to learn new culture and make new friends，which can improve their communication skills．
                 ①it作形式主語，真正的主語為后面的不定式短語to learn new culture and make new friends；②which引導一個非限制性定語從句，關系代詞which指代前一句中提到的事情．
                 2．Personally，studying abroad can help students broaden their horizons and learn to be independent．
                 非謂語動詞studying abroad 在句中作主語．
                 3．But I think it will be better for them to study abroad when they are old enough to support themselves financially．
                  這句中用到了句式結(jié)構(gòu)"it+be+（for sb）+to do sth"，其中it是形式主語，真正的主語是后面的不定式短語．

解答 In recent years more and more high school students study abroad during the holidays．
Studying abroad is beneficial to them．First of all，it will open their mind and enrich their experience．In addition，①it is a good chance to learn new culture and make new friends，②which can improve their communication skills（高分句型一）．However，it will take parents a lot of money to send their children abroad．And some students prefer traveling to learning．So it is a waste of money and absolutely not worthwhile．
Personally，studying abroad can help students broaden their horizons and learn to be independent（高分句型二）．But I think it will be better for them to study abroad when they are old enough to support themselves financially（高分句型三）．

點評 本題屬于議論文寫作，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，明確要點．2、注意將敘述、描寫等手法結(jié)合到議論中，為議論提供依據(jù)．3、注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．