Question

20．第一節(jié) 基礎寫作
上周班會課，你們班就"如何發(fā)展自己的情商"展開了熱烈討論，以下是討論情況：

情商內(nèi)容	認識和管理自身情緒； 自我激勵； 認知他人情緒； 處理人際關系．
高情商特征	社交能力強，外向而愉快； 富于同情心； 對事情較投入．
情商發(fā)展方式	養(yǎng)成良好習慣，如樂觀冷靜； 積極參加各種活動； 三思而后行．

*參考詞匯：情商：EQ （emotional quotient）
[寫作內(nèi)容]
根據(jù)以上情景，寫一篇短文，包括以下內(nèi)容：
1、討論的時間、主題和范圍；
2、情商的具體內(nèi)容；
3、情商高的特征；
4、情商發(fā)展方式．
[寫作要求]
只能用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容．
[評分標準]
句子結(jié)構準確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章連貫．
Last week in our class meeting，we had a heated discussion about how to develop our own emotional quotient．
As far as we can understand，EQ ranges from knowing and managing our own emotions，motivating ourselves，
understanding others'emotions to dealing with the relationship between people．（說明情商內(nèi)容）【高分句型一】Those who have a high EQ
usually possess such features as having excellent interpersonal skills，being outgoing，pleasant and sympathetic
as well as handling problems devotedly．（說明情商特征）To develop a better EQ，we ought to form good habits like keeping calm
and optimistic．【高分句型二】Furthermore，not only are we supposed to take an active part in various activities but also we
should think twice before taking action．（說明培養(yǎng)情商的方式）．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型
1．Those who have a high EQ usually possess such features as having excellent interpersonal skills，being outgoing，pleasant and sympathetic as well as handling
problems devotedly．
那些具有高情商的人擁有以下這些特征：比如社交能力強，外向而愉快，富于同情心還有做事情投入．
as well as，用作連詞意為"和…一樣好"之外，用作介詞時意為"不但…而且，還有"的含義，后面通常接名詞或動名詞．
2．Furthermore，not only are we supposed to take an active part in various activities but also we should think twice before taking action．
此外，我們不僅應該積極參加各種活動，而且我們也應該三思而后行．
not only…but also，意為"不但…而且…"，主要用于連接兩個對等的成分，【注意】若連接兩個成分做主語，其后的謂語動詞與靠近的主語保持一致．not only位于句首時，其后的句子需要使用倒裝形式．

解答 Last week in our class meeting，we had a heated discussion about how to develop our own emotional quotient．
As far as we can understand，EQ ranges from knowing and managing our own emotions，motivating ourselves，
 understanding others'emotions to dealing with the relationship between people．（說明情商內(nèi)容）【高分句型一】Those who have a high EQ
usually possess such features as having excellent interpersonal skills，being outgoing，pleasant and sympathetic
 as well as handling problems devotedly．（說明情商特征）To develop a better EQ，we ought to form good habits like keeping calm
 and optimistic．【高分句型二】Furthermore，not only are we supposed to take an active part in various activities but also we
should think twice before taking action．（說明培養(yǎng)情商的方式）

點評 考生在寫作時，注意使用人稱代詞，思路清晰，句式靈活，用詞精準，句意表達完整．