假定英語課上老師要同學(xué)之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同學(xué)寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線( \ )劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞。

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處）不計(jì)分。

Dear Mr. Johnson,

I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company. I am eager to being one of them. So I am writing the letter. My name is zhang Hua. I was born in the Hebei Province and I am in good health. I’ve just graduated in the Computer Department of Wuhan University. I did very good in all subjects and I am especial good at computer studies and English. I can read science books in English and doing some writing in English as well. Beside, I know a little French. And in my spare time ,I enjoy playing basketball. As is said that your company is very famous and I’ll very glad if you let me work for it. My telephone number is 027-89276628．I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

1.wanting改為wanted.

2.being改為be.

3.in改為from.

4.good改為well

5.especial改為especially.

6.doing改為do.

7.Beside改為Besides.

8.As改為It.

9.加be.

【解析】

試題分析：短文改錯(cuò)題。

1. learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company.句意：我從報(bào)紙上得知貴公司想要一些職員。換句話來講，一些職員被貴公司所需求，所以wanting改為wanted表達(dá)被動(dòng)語態(tài)，此時(shí)語氣更加委婉，故wanting改為wanted。

2. eager to do…渴望做……，故being改為be。

3. from…而不是graduate in…故from改為in。

4. well in =be good at…擅長(zhǎng)……。故good 改為well。

5. good at…只有副詞才能修飾動(dòng)詞，especial的副詞是especially，故especial改為especially。

6.

7.

8. is said that…據(jù)說……，是固定用法，故As改為It。

9. very glad if you let me work for it.此句缺少謂語動(dòng)詞，will后面跟動(dòng)詞原形，glad是一個(gè)形容詞，所以要用be動(dòng)詞充當(dāng)謂語動(dòng)詞，故加be。

考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)。

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