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16．假如你是李華，你的英國朋友Betty想知道中國野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)的情況．你準(zhǔn)備給她寫一封e-mail，向她介紹中國的愛鳥周（Bird-loving Week），內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
1．從1982年 起每年的4月至5月初的某一個(gè)星期為"愛鳥周"；
2．我國現(xiàn)有鳥類1300多種，其中有一些是珍稀種類；越來越多的人認(rèn)識(shí)到鳥類是大自然的重要組成部分，需要人類的保護(hù)；
3．現(xiàn)在許多青少年也加入到這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)中，爭做志愿者，向人們宣傳愛鳥的重要性．
    注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
          2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
          3．珍稀 rare      種類 species 
Dear Betty，
                                                                              
                                                                               
                                                                              
                                                                              
Yours，
                                                                Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
In your e-mail，you said that you wanted to know something about wildlife protection in China．在你的郵件里，你說你想知道一些在中國對于野生動(dòng)物的保護(hù)的事．
分句型二：
There are more than 1，300 species of birds in China，some of which are rare．在中國有超過1300種鳥類，其中有一些很稀有．
句型一 you said that you wanted to know something about wildlife protection in China  該句中有一個(gè)由that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，that在句中不作句子成分
句型二   some of which are rare  該句是一個(gè)介詞+關(guān)系詞 類型的定語從句，該句中的of表所屬關(guān)系，which替代前面的先行詞birds

解答 Dear Betty，
    In your e-mail，you said that you wanted to know something about wildlife protection in China．（高分句型一） Do you know Bird-loving Week？Bird-loving Week has been held in a week in April or early May since 1982．There are more than 1，300 species of birds in China，some of which are rare．（描述現(xiàn)狀）（高分句型二）Now more and more people realize that birds are an important part of nature and we need to protect them．Many students also join in the activity and become volunteers．They have public talks about birds，and tell people the importance of bird protection．I know you are a volunteer in a wildlife protection organization．I'd love to share your own experience there．
    I'm looking forward to your reply．
 
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 該書面表達(dá)為提綱類，該類作文一般規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，羅列出了相應(yīng)的寫作要點(diǎn)．考生在平時(shí)應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)的詞匯和短語，在寫作時(shí)盡量做到將要點(diǎn)與主題緊密結(jié)合，用準(zhǔn)確的、簡潔明了的語言將作文展示出來．