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5．銀川一中的�？�英語(yǔ)專(zhuān)欄正在開(kāi)始以"健康的生活方式"為主題的英語(yǔ)征文活動(dòng)，你打算參加．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示信息寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文．
1．營(yíng)養(yǎng)均衡的膳食； 2．經(jīng)常參加體育鍛煉；  3．樂(lè)觀的人生態(tài)度．
注意：1．字?jǐn)?shù)：100左右．開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫．
All of us want to live a happy life．                                 

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
To begin with，it's important that we should have a balanced diet because we need adequate nutrition to grow tall and strong．首先，我們應(yīng)該有一個(gè)平衡的飲食，因?yàn)槲覀冃枰�充足的營(yíng)養(yǎng)以使身體成長(zhǎng)．
高分句型二：
In addition，taking exercise regularly is of equal importance，which can help us keep fit and release stress．除此以外，有規(guī)律的鍛煉是同等重要的，那可以幫助我們保持健康釋放壓力．
句型一 ①it's important that we should have a balanced diet 該句是一個(gè)由it充當(dāng)形式主語(yǔ)，后面跟一個(gè)由that引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句 ②because we need adequate nutrition to grow tall and strong．該句是一個(gè)由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句
句型二 ①taking exercise regularly is of equal importance 該句是一個(gè)動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)作主語(yǔ)的句子，動(dòng)名詞或者動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)作主語(yǔ)時(shí)，謂語(yǔ)應(yīng)注意使用單數(shù) ②which can help us keep fit and release stress 該句是hi一個(gè)由which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，which在定語(yǔ)從句中作主語(yǔ)，替代前面整個(gè)主句的內(nèi)容．

解答 All of us want to live a healthy life．The following are some useful tips．
   To begin with，it's important that we should have a balanced diet because we need adequate nutrition to grow tall and strong．（高分句型一）Not only should we take in enough grains and meat，but we should also eat fruits and vegetables．In addition，taking exercise regularly is of equal importance，which can help us keep fit and release stress．（高分句型二）More importantly，we should develop a positive attitude，which allows us to look at things positively，no matter what happens．Even if we are in a difficult situation，we should never lose hope．（方法羅列）
   Proper food，regular exercise and a positive attitude will help us live a healthy life．（總結(jié)全文）

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