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12．目前，越來(lái)越多的中學(xué)生利用周末上各種各樣的培訓(xùn)班或請(qǐng)家教．對(duì)于這一現(xiàn)象，存在兩種不同觀點(diǎn)：

有些人認(rèn)為有必要	另一些人認(rèn)為沒(méi)有必要
跟老師學(xué)比自己學(xué)好 可以鞏固課堂所學(xué)內(nèi)容 可以學(xué)到更多的東西	容易養(yǎng)成依賴習(xí)慣 學(xué)生需要時(shí)間休息 許多培訓(xùn)班和家教以贏利為目的

請(qǐng)您根據(jù)以上提示，以Is a Training Class of Family Teacher Necessary？為題，寫一篇120詞左右的短文，反映表中內(nèi)容，并簡(jiǎn)要闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)．文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)．
要求：層次清晰，連貫流暢；表達(dá)靈活，不要逐字逐句翻譯．
參考詞匯：鞏固strengthen；
Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary？
More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend．There are two different viewpoints about it．
Some thinks it necessary．Firstly，it's more effective to study with a teacher than by themselves．Secondly，it can strengthen what is learnt in class．Besides，they can learn a lot more．Others think it unnecessary．For one thing，students can easily form the habit of dependence．For another，students need time to relax from time to time．What's more，the purpose of many training classes and teachers is to make money．
In my opinion，whether a training class or family teacher is needed just depends．If you are really very weak at or interested in a certain subject，maybe it's OK for you．But be sure to choose a good and suitable class or teacher，otherwise it would be a waste of time and money．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇話題類作文，短文標(biāo)題、開頭及寫作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，我們所要做的就是根據(jù)題目?jī)?nèi)容寫一篇英文短文．由于題干給出的要點(diǎn)比較簡(jiǎn)潔，所以需要對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行擴(kuò)展．題目中的要點(diǎn)都要提到，缺一不可．要反映表中內(nèi)容，并簡(jiǎn)要闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)．另外，要注意不要偏離文章中心，寫作時(shí)注意層次清晰，連貫流暢；
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文中運(yùn)用一些常見(jiàn)的短語(yǔ)from time to time時(shí)不是；in one's opinion在某人看來(lái)；be interested in對(duì)．感興趣；Firstly，it is more effective to study with a teacher than by themselves．這個(gè)句子it做形式主語(yǔ)，真正的主語(yǔ)是后面的不定式；What is more，the purpose of many training classes and teachers is to make money．這個(gè)句子運(yùn)用到不定式做表語(yǔ)；In my opinion，whether a training class or family teacher is needed just depends這個(gè)句子運(yùn)用到whether引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句；

解答 Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary？
       More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend．There are two different viewpoints about it．
      Some thinks it necessary．Firstly，it's more effective to study with a teacher than by themselves．Secondly，it can strengthen what is learnt in class．（高分句型一）Besides，they can learn a lot more．Others think it unnecessary．For one thing，students can easily form the habit of dependence．For another，students need time to relax from time to time．What's more，the purpose of many training classes and teachers is to make money．（高分句型二）
       In my opinion，whether a training class or family teacher is needed just depends．If you are really very weak at or interested in a certain subject，maybe it's OK for you．But be sure to choose a good and suitable class or teacher，otherwise it would be a waste of time and money．（高分句型三）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．