Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你是新華一中的學(xué)生李華，你從網(wǎng)上看到John在某英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部發(fā)布里一個(gè)帖子邀請(qǐng)各國(guó)愛(ài)好英語(yǔ)的學(xué)生家人該俱樂(lè)部，以加強(qiáng)交流，提高英語(yǔ)水平。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)一下要點(diǎn)提示，用英語(yǔ)寫封電子郵件。

要點(diǎn)：1.簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己（如：哪國(guó)人，愛(ài)好等）

2.決定參加該俱樂(lè)部的原因（交朋友，提高英語(yǔ)水平）；

3.希望成為其中一員。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，是行文連貫；開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear John,

I’m glad to read the post on the Internet that you welcome students who like English.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear John,

I’m glad to read the post on the Internet that you welcome students who like English.I’m interested in it and want to join the club.

My name is Li Hua, a Chinese student from Xinhua No. 1 Middle School. I like English very much and have won prizes in English speech contests. I want to make full use of the chance to practise my English and speak it not only accurately but also fluently.In addition, I want to make friends with students from different countries, so that we can learn from each other to improve our English. I hope I”ll be accepted as a member of the club.

Look forward to your reply.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是篇郵件應(yīng)用文，內(nèi)容提示較簡(jiǎn)潔，只是框架，但學(xué)生容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的�？忌�在寫作之前必修認(rèn)真審題，首先要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和將來(lái)時(shí)。人稱用第一和第二人稱。再有就是不能根據(jù)材料逐字逐句的翻譯應(yīng)該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章要點(diǎn)齊全，表達(dá)思路明確，知識(shí)點(diǎn)運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)轿�，文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，比如English speech contests，make full use of the chance，not only accurately but also fluently等。還運(yùn)用了定語(yǔ)從句I’m glad to read the post on the Internet that you welcome students who like English。