Question

【題目】閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。

John was traveling by ship to Europe when a terrible storm came. A great leak was filling the ship with water. No matter how hard the sailors and passengers worked at the pumps, the water was still rising. The ship was sinking fast. There seemed to be no hope. But the captain told them not to give up hope. He said that there was hope so long as the ship remained above water. He promised that if they didn’t give up hope, he would land them safely. The captain’s powerful will moved them all. In the end he did land them safely.

After they landed, John found the captain to show his appreciation. But to his surprise, the captain said to him that he was the boy of 30 years ago who bought a geography book in his bookstore. John suddenly thought of the boy. At that time the boy didn’t have enough money, but he had gone from shop to shop and believed he could get what he wanted. Finally, he made it. Now , it was the same willpower of him that saved the lives of all the passengers.

【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】

在一次課外閱讀中，你讀上面的故事，決定寫(xiě)篇文章針對(duì)“毅力與成功”發(fā)表自己的看法。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：

1．以約30個(gè)詞概括故事的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；

2．然后以約120個(gè)詞就“毅力與成功”這個(gè)主題發(fā)表你的看法，內(nèi)容包括：

（1）敘述你或你的同學(xué)憑借毅力取得成功的事例；

（2）你認(rèn)為取得成功，主要是靠毅力還是智力？

【寫(xiě)作要求】

1．你可以使用實(shí)例或者其他論證方法支持你的觀點(diǎn)，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但是不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；

【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。

Answer 1

【答案】In the story, a captain always insisted on doing something, even when he was a little boy. In one voyage, it was just his willpower that made him save all the passengers’ lives.

The story reminds me of my classmate, Linda. In study, she lagged far behind us, but she did not give up. Instead, she kept a notebook in her pocket, and took it out to read on the bus, at the school gate and in the queue before the dining hall.

Unluckily, her English did not improve much. She took up this challenge and worked even harder. Besides, she kept turning to the teacher for help. Finally she made great progress.

Many elements contribute to success, of which the most important is willpower. A man of strong will never gives up before any difficulty, nor does he lose heart whatever happens. So I think willpower is more important than intelligence on the road to success.

【解析】試題分析：本文對(duì)考生的要求較高，要求考生首先讀懂原文，再根據(jù)文字提示寫(xiě)作。寫(xiě)信的要點(diǎn)都隱含在信中，再讀懂文章的基礎(chǔ)上，要考生自己歸納出來(lái)，再一一進(jìn)行解決，考生需要使用合適的連接詞把這些要點(diǎn)連接成文，也要注意運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)母呒?jí)句型如定語(yǔ)從句，強(qiáng)調(diào)句等讓文章不顯得那么平淡，而有文采。在詞匯的運(yùn)用上也要注意，使用相對(duì)高級(jí)的詞匯提升文章的檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文中運(yùn)用一些常見(jiàn)的短語(yǔ)insist on堅(jiān)持；remind sb of sth 使某人想起某物；give up放棄；take up 從事；contribute to有助于；make progress取得進(jìn)步；Many elements contribute to success, of which the most important is willpower.這個(gè)句子運(yùn)用到非限制性定語(yǔ)從句； A man of strong will never gives up before any difficulty, nor does he lose heart whatever happens.這個(gè)句子運(yùn)用到否定詞放在句首用部分倒裝；