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【題目】最近新華中學高三（10）班同學開展了一場“司機醉駕是否應該處罰乘客”的討論。請你根據下表提供的信息, 給報社寫一封信, 介紹討論的情況, 并發(fā)表你的看法。

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少數同學贊成處罰乘客	大多數同學反對處罰乘客
1．減少交通事故,促進交通安全 2．不乘坐醉酒司機的車,不僅是對自己負責, 也是對司機和路人負責	1．乘客難以判斷司機是否醉酒 2．即使乘客知道司機飲酒, 如果司機不聽從乘客的勸誡, 處罰乘客是不公平的
你的看法：……

［評分標準］句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章結構連貫。

Dear Editor，

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether passengers who ride in a car driven by a drunken driver should be punished．

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Yours sincerely，

Li yan

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor，

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether passengers who ride in a car driven by a drunken driver should be punished．The minority of the students hold the opinion that punishing the passengers helps to reduce traffic accidents and increase traffic safety．Not to ride in a car driven by a drunken driver is not only a responsible behavior for passengers themselves but also for the drivers and other people on the road．

The majority of the students, however, disapprove of the idea, stating that it is difficult for common passengers to know whether the driver has been drinking or not．What’s more, even if the passenger knows the driver has drunk alcohol and has attempted to persuade the driver not to drive, it is unfair to punish the passenger when the driver does not follow the advice．As far as I am concerned, punishing passengers as well as the drivers is not only unfair but is also hard to carry out．

Yours sincerely，

Li Yan

【解析】

試題分析 ：寫信，是應用文的范疇。注意條理要清晰，邏輯順序和結構要恰當，同時要盡量保持簡潔精干的內容，不拖泥帶水。要注意題中所給的信息，不可偏題，注意寫信的格式。盡量保持卷面整潔，字體美觀，注意行文的連貫性。

【亮點分析】

文中所給的句子不看，第一句是一個賓語從句The minority of the students hold the opinion that punishing the passengers helps to reduce traffic accidents and increase traffic safety．少數學生認為，懲罰乘客能夠幫助減少交通事故，增加交通安全性。第二段用于陳述多數人的意見。第一句是一個that引導的賓語從句，賓語從句中有一個whether引導的賓語從句，也用了it做形式主語The majority of the students, however, disapprove of the idea, stating that it is difficult for common passengers to know whether the driver has been drinking or not．大多數學生，不同意以上的觀點，認為，知道司機是否喝醉了是對于普通乘客來說是很困難的。第二句中even if引導了一個讓步狀語從句，when引導了一個時間狀語從句What’s more, even if the passenger knows the driver has drunk alcohol and has attempted to persuade the driver not to drive, it is unfair to punish the passenger when the driver does not follow the advice．更重要的，即使乘客知道了司機喝酒了，并且試著勸說司機不要開車，當司機不聽勸告的時候，懲罰乘客是不公平的。本文除了使用多個復合從句，還用了一些比較好的短語和結構。The majority of （多數）、The minority of （少數）；not only …but also（不僅…而且）；it is+adj+ for sb to do sth（做某事對于某人來說很…）；What’s more（更重要的）；As far as I am concerned（就我所知）；as well as （也）；carry out（實現(xiàn)）等。整篇文章結構連貫，意思表達明確，格式完整，是一篇不錯的范文