Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)
In campus violence cases in Beijing during the last five years, 14 percent of the offenders not only beat others, but also insulted(侮辱)them. They slapped(打耳光)others, made them kneel down, and in some cases took off other peoples clothes.
Violence at schools has been widely reported in media in recent years—the violence among teenagers has drawn public and government attention. On Nov 11, the Ministry of education, along with eight other central sectors, published a guideline on dealing with school violence.
The guideline stressed that students with serious behavioral problems should be handed over to special schools. Or, in more serious cases, they may take criminal responsibility and be sent to prison.
“The common tolerant attitude toward violence should be changed,” wrote Jiaxing Daily. “When teenagers do something wrong, we should tolerate and help them when necessary. But all of this has a limit.”
[寫作內(nèi)容]
( 1 )以約30個(gè)詞概括上文的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；
( 2 )然后以約120個(gè)詞寫作以下相關(guān)內(nèi)容：
1)校園暴力存在且越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重的原因（至少兩點(diǎn)）；
2)你認(rèn)為如何應(yīng)對(duì)校園暴力（至少兩點(diǎn)）；
[寫作要求]
( 1 )不得直接引用原文中的句子；
( 2 )文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]
概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。

Answer 1

【答案】As is shown in the short passage above, campus violence among teenagers has become an increasingly serious problem, but fortunately, the government has realized it and decided to take measures to deal with it.

There are several factors accounting for the situation worrying us, among which people's tolerant attitude can't be neglected. When campus violence happens, the absence of severe punishments usually makes matters worse, leading to those bad guys being more offensive and aggressive. In addition, when faced with such violence, teen victims are too afraid to report it to parents or the school, let alone call the police.

In a bid to wrestle with the serious problem, joint forces must be involved. Schools should impose severe punishments upon those offenders, even including removing them from school. Under extreme circumstances, sentencing them to prison is a necessity. As for the individuals of victims, they should be encouraged and guided to face the violence bravely and learn to protect themselves.

【解析】本文是一篇提綱式作文，寫作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，要求考生以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式，寫出校園暴力存在且越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重的原因以及應(yīng)對(duì)校園暴力所采取的措施。寫作過(guò)程中注意使用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。