Question

要求：根據(jù)以下漢語提示，完成下面小作文。

注意：添加適當(dāng)連接語，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整、語意連貫。

下周末，學(xué)校即將召開高三學(xué)生家長(zhǎng)會(huì)。英語老師要求學(xué)生用英語寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀銓?duì)家長(zhǎng)會(huì)的看法。

要點(diǎn)如下：

為了相互溝通，提高學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)，我校將在下周末召開高三年級(jí)家長(zhǎng)會(huì)。

我們班的同學(xué)們對(duì)此事看法不一。

部分同學(xué)認(rèn)為家長(zhǎng)會(huì)是必要的，可以讓父母對(duì)我們的學(xué)校生活、學(xué)習(xí)狀況了解更多，進(jìn)而促進(jìn)我們的學(xué)習(xí)。

而且，父母?jìng)兛梢詮睦蠋熌抢锏玫揭恍┛茖W(xué)的建議和有效的信息。

這對(duì)我們今年繁忙的學(xué)習(xí)和生活有很大的幫助。畢竟，父母不是專業(yè)的教育者。

然而，部分同學(xué)認(rèn)為家長(zhǎng)會(huì)是沒有用的，因?yàn)樗麄儾幌胱尲议L(zhǎng)知道自己在學(xué)校不好的行為表現(xiàn)以及不好的成績(jī)。

我認(rèn)為，溝通與理解是最重要的。我們應(yīng)該把家長(zhǎng)會(huì)看作家校溝通與交流的平臺(tái)。因此，高三家長(zhǎng)會(huì)是很有必要的。

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Answer 1

After the examination, a parents’ meeting will be held in our school this weekend. Parents’ meetings are often held to help parents contact the school and teachers and improve the students’ studies, but there are some different voices in our class.

Most students think it is of great importance to have the meeting for their parents because in this way parents will know more about their children at school, which of course contributes to their growth. What is more, parents can get some good advice and useful information from teachers. After all, parents are not professional educators and they need some guidance when communicating with children. On the contrary, a minority of students hold the view that it is useless because they think their parents may know their poor marks and improper behavior at school.

As far as I’m concerned, understanding and communicating is the most important. A parents’ meeting should be a good platform on which parents, teachers and even children themselves can voice their opinions. So parents’ meetings are quite necessary.

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求根據(jù)所給提示用英語寫一篇短文，談?wù)剬?duì)家長(zhǎng)會(huì)的看法。寫作要點(diǎn)包括： 開家長(zhǎng)會(huì)的目的；同學(xué)們的看法；自己的看法這三個(gè)方面。注意使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞語，使作文結(jié)構(gòu)完整、語意連貫；不要出現(xiàn)標(biāo)點(diǎn)和拼寫錯(cuò)誤，盡量保持卷面整潔、字體美觀；注意行文的連貫性。

亮點(diǎn)說明：范文涵蓋了所有的寫作要點(diǎn)，進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣�，并注意語句的連貫性；范文還使用了賓語從句、定語從句、原因狀語從句等語法知識(shí)，具備較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力。

語法方面：賓語從句it is of great importance to have the meeting for their parents；原因狀語從句①because in this way parents will know more about their children at school，②because they think their parents may know their poor marks and improper behavior at school；定語從句①which of course contributes to their growth，②on which parents, teachers and even children themselves can voice their opinions；同位語從句 that it is useless等，語法知識(shí)運(yùn)用嫻熟，顯示了較強(qiáng)的語法功底，也使作文句式變得多樣；

篇章結(jié)構(gòu)方面：范文注意使用after the examination, but, what is more, after all, on the contrary, as far as I’m concerned等來銜接句子和段落，使表達(dá)變得更有條理；

短語和搭配方面：范文使用了be of importance, in this way, communicate with, a minority of, contribute to等短語和搭配，使作文的內(nèi)容變得充實(shí)。

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