Question

畢業(yè)前夕，你班決定給李老師送一份禮物，大家提出兩條建議：

(1) 送影集(album)，里面有每個同學的照片；(2) 送磁帶，錄有每個同學對老師的祝福。

請以"An Album or a Tape"為題，用英語寫一篇短文。首先簡述以上兩條建議，然后表明你同意其中哪一條．并說明理由（至少兩點）。

注意：1．短文必須以第一人稱書寫。

2．詞數(shù)：100詞左右。開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

We are leaving school and we decide to give a gift to Mr. Li who has taught us for three years_____________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

We are leaving school and we decide to give a gift to Mr. Li who has taught us for three years. Two suggestions have been provided by our classmates. One is that we may give him an album with photos of all the students in our class. The other suggestion is that a tape in which our best wishes are recorded should be given to him.

In my opinion, we had better buy an album for Mr. Li. First, an album is easier to be kept than a tape. A tape may be easily destroyed a few years later and does not work. Second, I think, the photos in the album can easily remind Mr. Li of his lovely students and the good days when he got together with us. Third, voice may be changed a lot after many years as to us young students, while faces do not have such great changes. In a word, I suggest .we take photos in time and present them in the album to Mr. Li.

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱類書面表達：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來. 動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮點說明】范文中運用一些短語give sb sth給某人某物；in one’s opinion 在某人看來；get together with與。。在一起；in a word總而言之；One is that we may give him an album with photos of all the students in our class.這個句子中that引導表語從句；The other suggestion is that a tape in which our best wishes are recorded should be given to him這個句子中that引導表語從句，in which引導tape的定語從句。In a word, I suggest .we take photos in time and present them in the album to Mr. Li這個句子suggest當建議講，賓語從句should do 其中should可以省略；

考點： 提綱類作文