Question

6．某英文報近期舉辦以"感恩與我同行"為主題的英語征文大賽．請你據(jù)圖及提示的內(nèi)容寫一篇感恩老師的英文短文參賽．
主要內(nèi)容如下：
1）感謝老師的關(guān)心鼓勵；
2）感謝老師的辛勤勞動；
3）感謝老師的諄諄教誨；
4）…
注意：
1．短文須圍繞"感恩與我同行"的主題．
2．短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
3．詞數(shù)：120左右．
Thanks to You，My Teacher
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Answer 1

分析 本文為征文．本文主題為：感恩與我同行．
寫作要點為：1）感謝老師的關(guān)心鼓勵；
2）感謝老師的辛勤勞動；
3）感謝老師的諄諄教誨；
4）…

解答 One possible version：
Thanks to You，My Teacher
I would like to thank you for all the help you have given me．You are very friendly to everyone in our class．You always get on very well with us students．
What impresses me most is that you are not only our teacher but also our friend．You are always so patient whenever we ask you questions．We are all moved when you listen carefully and explain everything so thoroughly．You show us different ways to learn English．We feel so encouraged and become more comfortable in your class．You make your class so lively and interesting that every one of us is always eager to participate and practice．Our English has improved so much．
You teach us not only how to learn English well but also how to be good citizens．We owe much to you，my teacher．

點評 考生需了解寫作要點及寫作意圖，合理安排寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，平時注意積累詞匯及語法知識．