Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

As is often the case, when people are attending meeting, having meals or waiting buses, you can always find them addicted to their phones, complete ignoring others.

This is really a common phenomenon in our life. The reason is why smart phones nowadays can be used for people to play mobile games and kept in touch with friends through QQ and WeChat. But, too much exposure to phones are bad for people in terms of health. Moreover, people involved in phones fail to communicate good with those around them.

As far as I am concerning, people should wisely make use of their phones to help with their work and study. Meanwhile, care most about their family and friends rather than mobile phones.

Answer 1

【答案】

As is often the case, when people are attending meeting, having meals or waiting ∧ buses, you

meetings for

can always find them addicted to their phones, complete ignoring others.

completely

This is really a common phenomenon in our life. The reason is why smart phones nowadays can

that

be used for people to play mobile games and kept in touch with friends through QQ and WeChat.

keep

But, too much exposure to phones are bad for people in terms of health. Moreover, people

However is

involved in phones fail to communicate good with those around them.

well

As far as I am concerning, people should wisely make use of their phones to help with their work

concerned

and study. Meanwhile, care most about their family and friends rather than mobile phones.

more

【1】第一句meeting→meetings，考查名詞�？蓴�(shù)名詞單數(shù)不可單獨(dú)使用，另外根據(jù)與后面形式一致故將meeting改為meetings。

【2】第一句waiting和buses之間加for

【3】第一句complete→completely

【4】第三句why→-that

【5】第三句kept→keep

【6】第四句But →However

【7】第四句are ---is

【8】第五句good→well

【9】第六句concerning→concerned

【10】第七句most →more

【解析】

【1】第一句meeting→meetings，考查名詞�？蓴�(shù)名詞單數(shù)不可單獨(dú)使用，另外根據(jù)與后面形式一致故將meeting改為meetings。

【2】第一句waiting和buses之間加for，考查動(dòng)詞。wait是不及物動(dòng)詞，故在后面加for。

【3】第一句complete→completely， 考查副詞。ignoring為動(dòng)詞，修飾動(dòng)詞應(yīng)用副詞，故complete改為completely。

【4】第三句why→-that， 考查引導(dǎo)詞。這是因?yàn)橹悄苁謾C(jī)可以被用來玩游戲等，本題考查固定句型：the reason is that…原因是。故why改為that。

【5】第三句kept→keep 考查動(dòng)詞。此處為and連接兩個(gè)并列的動(dòng)詞不定時(shí)。故kept改為keep。

【6】第四句But →However考查連詞。but后面接句子不用逗號(hào)隔開，however用逗號(hào)隔開，故But改為However。

【7】第四句are ---is考查be動(dòng)詞。 too much exposure to phones做主語謂語動(dòng)詞應(yīng)用單數(shù)。故are改為is。

【8】第五句good→well考查副詞。修飾動(dòng)詞應(yīng)用副詞。故good改為well 。

【9】第六句concerning→concerned考查固定短語。As far as I am concerned意思為：就我而言，故concerning改為concerned。

【10】第七句most →more，考查比較級(jí)。與此同時(shí)，多多關(guān)注他們的家人和朋友，而不是手機(jī)。故most改為more。