假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分

Lin Qiaozhi was a specialist in women’s disease. She lived in a generation that girl’s education was second to boy’s. It was hard work and determination which got her into medical school. What made her success later on was the kindness and consideration the showed to her patients. There is story after story of how she, tiring after a day’s work, went late at night to deliver a baby for a poor family who could not pay for her. She was said to have devoted her whole life to her patients and safe delivered about 50,000 babies. It seemed that she had been busy with her choosing career, in traveling abroad to study as well as write books and articles She also wrote a book intended for woman in the countryside. How greatly she was!

1.that--when

2.which--that

3.is--was

4.tiring--tired

5.去掉 for

6.safe--safely

7.choosing--chosen

8.write--writing

9.woman--women

10.greatly--great

【解析】

試題分析：

1.文中第二句。本句考查定語(yǔ)從句的連接詞的選擇。先行詞為generation，帶入從句中解釋為在那個(gè)時(shí)代，擔(dān)當(dāng)著時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)。故連接詞不用that，而用when。句意為：她生活的那個(gè)年代，女孩的教育的重要性要次于男孩的教育。

2.文中第三句。本句考查強(qiáng)調(diào)句型。強(qiáng)調(diào)句型基本句型為：It is/was+被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分+that/who+其余成分。因此本句需要把which改成that。句意為：正是她的努力學(xué)習(xí)和決心才使得她進(jìn)入了醫(yī)學(xué)院。

3.文中第五句。本句考查時(shí)態(tài)。本篇文章介紹了林巧稚的一生，是已經(jīng)發(fā)生了的事情。并且上下文都是一般過(guò)去時(shí)，故本句中的is要改成was。

4.文中第五句。本句考查形容詞的用法。形容詞tiring和tired的區(qū)別：tiring解釋為令人疲勞的；tired解釋為感到疲倦的。本句句意為：關(guān)于她怎樣在一天的工作后感到勞累了，卻仍然工作到深夜為貧苦家庭接生的故事一個(gè)接一個(gè)。可知，本句表示她感到勞累了，故把tiring改成tired。

5.文中第五句�？疾閯�(dòng)詞用法。Pay意為付給某人錢；pay for意為替某人付款、為…付錢的意思。本句句意為：那個(gè)貧苦的家庭付不起錢給她。故去掉for。

6.文中第六句�？疾楦痹~修飾動(dòng)詞。本句句意為：據(jù)說(shuō)她把自己的一生都獻(xiàn)給了自己的病人并且安全地接生了大約50000孩子。修飾動(dòng)詞 deliver應(yīng)該用副詞，而不是形容詞。故把safe改成safely。

7.文中第七句。句意為：似乎她一直忙于自己所選的職業(yè)。根據(jù)句意，應(yīng)該把原句中的choosing改成chosen。意為：選出來(lái)的。

8.文中第七句。本句考查前后一致。as well as解釋為和、也，它連接的詞前后應(yīng)該一致，因此把后面的write要改成writing，和前面的travelling保持一致。句意為：忙于去國(guó)外學(xué)習(xí)和寫書寫文章。

9.文中倒數(shù)第二句。句意為：她還為農(nóng)村女性們寫了一本書。此時(shí)是指廣大農(nóng)村女性，不是指一個(gè)，故把原句中的woman改成women。

10.文中倒數(shù)第一句。句意為：她是多么偉大啊!本句考查形容詞擔(dān)當(dāng)表語(yǔ)，故把原句中的greatly改成great。

考點(diǎn)：考查短文糾錯(cuò)

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