1．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同學(xué)寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào) （∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線 （\） 劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
 2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
I am secretary of the City Student Union （CSU）．We were organizing an art exhibition for high school students in city．It will be held in the 9th of July in the Exhibition Hall of Beihai．More than 1000painting will be on show，but high school students and teachers from all the eight districts will come to the event．As you are very popularly with us Chinese high school students，we'd like to invite for you to the exhibition．We would be grateful when you could join them that day．Looking forward to hear from you soon．

分析 本文是一份邀請(qǐng)函，作者正在組織一個(gè)高中學(xué)生的藝術(shù)展．該展會(huì)將于7月9日在北海展覽廳舉行．有超過1000幅圖畫作品將被展示，同時(shí)來自所有8個(gè)地區(qū)的高中學(xué)生都會(huì)參加這次活動(dòng)．邀請(qǐng)一位名人參加此次展覽．

解答 I am secretary of the City Student Union （CSU）．We were organizing an art exhibition for high school students in∧city．It will be held in the 9th of July in the Exhibition Hall of Beihai．More than 1000painting will be on show，but high school students and teachers from all the eight districts will come to the event．As you are very popularly with us Chinese high school students，we'd like to invite for you to the exhibition．We would be grateful when you could join them that day．Looking forward to hear from you soon．
詳解：
1．were改為are 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)．從上下文中可以看出，要用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)，而非過去進(jìn)行時(shí)態(tài)．
2．加the 考查冠詞．此處的城市指我所在的城市，表示特指，要加定冠詞the．
3．in改為on 考查介詞．在特定的某一天要用介詞on，而不是介詞in．
4．painting改為paintings 考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)．painting意為"畫"，是可數(shù)名詞，其前有數(shù)詞修飾時(shí)，要用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
5．but改為and 考查連詞． 此處是承接上一句的意思，而非轉(zhuǎn)折．
6．popularly改為popular 考查形容詞．be popularly with中要用形容詞，此處是形容詞作表語，而非修飾動(dòng)詞．be popular with意為"受…歡迎"．
7．去掉for 考查謂語動(dòng)詞．invite是及物動(dòng)詞，后可直接接名詞或代詞作賓語，不必接介詞．
8．when改為if 考查虛擬語氣．此處表示的是虛擬語氣，要用if．
9．them改為us 考查代詞．這是一份邀請(qǐng)函，應(yīng)是加入到我們之中．
10．hear改為hearing 考查動(dòng)名詞．在look forward to中to是介詞，后接動(dòng)詞時(shí)要?jiǎng)用~形式．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 高考短文改錯(cuò)題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學(xué)生的實(shí)際，從表面上看類似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時(shí)把一些容易的錯(cuò)誤先改好，再進(jìn)行逐句改錯(cuò)．其次，要進(jìn)行逐個(gè)句子的改錯(cuò)．這是要對(duì)文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．

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