Question

假如你是李曉華，住在惠州。你的加拿大筆友Bob來信談到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家鄉(xiāng)惠州的情況。請你用英語寫一封回信�；匦彭毎�括下表中的內(nèi)容:

自然情況	①位于西枝江邊、風(fēng)景優(yōu)美、適合居住
成就	②經(jīng)濟發(fā)展迅速 ③新建了不少工廠、住房、道路等
存在問題	④水、空氣污染 ⑤交通擁擠
對惠州發(fā)展的看法	⑥(內(nèi)容由考生自己擬定)

注意:

1.回信中不能使用“惠州”以外的地名。

2.內(nèi)容完整，不要逐字翻譯。

參考詞匯: 經(jīng)濟economy （n.）

Dear Bob，

It’s very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Hui Zhou.

Answer 1

Dear Bob,

It’s very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Hui Zhou.

The city stands on the bank of the Xi Zhi River, which is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses and roads have been built and more schools and hospitals are available for its people. However, there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. In my opinion, Hui Zhou should develop its economy scientifically and I would also think that the growth of its population should be brought under control so that we’ll have a better hometown in future.

Yours,

Xiao Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇回信寫作，考生應(yīng)注意英文書信的格式，包括稱呼、正文、結(jié)束語、署名四部分。這類題型中，書信正文的開頭除簡單的問候外，應(yīng)總結(jié)下上封來信中提出的問題、需求等，然后提出自己的建議或發(fā)表自己的看法�？忌鷳�(yīng)按題目要求寫作，比如此題要求考生介紹家鄉(xiāng)惠州的情況，包括其自然情況、成就、存在問題及發(fā)表自己對惠州發(fā)展的看法�？忌鷳�(yīng)注意單詞拼寫及語句通順。

亮點說明：本文采用先敘后議的寫法，先敘述惠州的相關(guān)情況，最后發(fā)表自己的看法。從正反兩方面分析問題，既敘述惠州的成就，也指出它發(fā)展中的問題。體現(xiàn)行文的邏輯性強。定語從句“which is a beautiful place for people to live in”的使用、被動語態(tài)“New factories, houses and roads have been built and more schools and hospitals are available for its people.”的運用、完成時態(tài)“Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years”等多種時態(tài)的使用給文章增添了文采，顯示出考生的英語能力。However作為轉(zhuǎn)折連詞，由敘述轉(zhuǎn)向議論，行文過渡自然。In my opinion提出自己的觀點，是整個行文通順自然。

考點：考查書信類寫作。