Question

短文改錯（共10處錯誤；每處錯誤1分，滿分10分）

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

增加： 在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改： 在錯詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work has made him very illness. “He has ruined his health. We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon. I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see her, but outside his room I stopped. I had to calm me down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looked some of the pictures we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.

Answer 1

1.with改成on

2.把so刪掉

3.ilness改成ill

4.which改成what

5.在visit前加 a

6.see后的her改成him

7.me 改成myself

8.step改成stepped

9.looked改成looking

10.many改成much

【解析】

1.】花費太多的時間在工作上，用spend time on something， 介詞with改成on。

2.】with結(jié)構(gòu)表伴隨，這里只有一個句子不能用連詞，因此把so刪掉。

3. somebody +形容詞.名詞illness改成ill。

4.因此which改成what。

5.】拜訪某人 pay a visit to，因此在visit前加 a。

6.】Mr. Johnson是男人，這里代詞使用錯誤，因此 see后的her改成him。

7.】我是自己心情平靜，用反身代詞，因此me 改成myself。

8.】通篇是一般過去時，因此 step改成stepped。

9.人看照片，看和躺在床上并列，都是表示主動關(guān)系，用現(xiàn)在分詞。looked改成looking。

10.】他想念我們和我們想念他一樣多，不可數(shù)用much 修飾， many改成much。

考點：短文改錯