Question

5．假定你是李華，在參加北京外國(guó)大學(xué)自主招生考試（BFSU's pre-test）期間，于3月2日入住一家賓館606房間，3月6日退房．你回家后發(fā)現(xiàn)把一個(gè)中等大小藍(lán)色皮背包遺失在那里，內(nèi)有幾本備考書籍，一個(gè)紅色限量版ipod，和一張信用卡．現(xiàn)請(qǐng)用英文給該賓館經(jīng)理寫一封信，請(qǐng)他/她幫忙尋找并寄回．
信件要點(diǎn)包括：
•陳述寫信原因
•簡(jiǎn)要描述該背包
•說(shuō)明其重要性
•期待回復(fù)并表示感謝
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右．
2．信件格式已為你給出．
Dear Sir or Madam，
       ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I'm so grateful for your good service during my stay for BFSU'pre-test，but I'm writing to ask a favour to find and send back my pack which I left in your hotel．
高分句型二：
 I'll appreciate it very much if you can give me your reply and thank you for anything you can do for me．
句型一 which I left in your hotel．該句是一個(gè)由which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，which在句中充當(dāng)賓語(yǔ)，替代前面出現(xiàn)的先行詞pack
句型二 I'll appreciate it very much if you can give me 該句是考查了it作形式賓語(yǔ)的用法，appreciate后面使用it作形式賓語(yǔ)，真正的賓語(yǔ)是if引導(dǎo)的從句

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
   I'm so grateful for your good service during my stay for BFSU'pre-test，but I'm writing to ask a favour to find and send back my pack which I left in your hotel．（高分句型一）（寫信意圖）
   I checked in on Mar，2 and out on Mar.6．Setting off in a rush for the station，I left the pack in Room 606．It's a middle-sized，blue，leather backpack which contains several books that are wanted in reviewing NMET，a red ipod of special edition as well as a credit card．（描述物品）All in the pack matters to me，especially the ipad is precious gift from my father on my 18th birthday．So much do I cherish it that I feel upset for the loss．
   If you find it，would you please post it to me？The return address is on the envelope．
   I'll appreciate it very much if you can give me your reply and thank you for anything you can do for me．（高分句型二）
 Yours sincerely，
Li hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 該書面表達(dá)為提綱類，該類作文一般規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，羅列出了相應(yīng)的寫作要點(diǎn)．考生在平時(shí)應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)的詞匯和短語(yǔ)，在寫作時(shí)盡量做到將要點(diǎn)與主題緊密結(jié)合，用準(zhǔn)確的、簡(jiǎn)潔明了的語(yǔ)言將作文展示出來(lái)．