Question

20．"地球一小時(shí)"，是為應(yīng)對全球氣候變化所發(fā)起的一項(xiàng)活動，號召每年3月份最后一個(gè)周六的20：30-21：30，統(tǒng)一熄燈一小時(shí)．然而，隨著越來越多國家和城市的加入，其弊端也逐步顯現(xiàn)．假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語給某英文報(bào)社寫一封信：
    1．指出活動的目的（宣傳環(huán)保）；：
    2．指出活動的必要性（環(huán)境惡化）；
    3．指出活動的弊端（事故和費(fèi)電）；
    4．表達(dá)出你的觀點(diǎn)．
注意：1．詞數(shù)120-150；
    2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)．
Dear editor，
    I am glad to write to you to express my idea about the activity Earth Hour．                         
                                                                                    
    I really hope our environment becomes better and better．
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
What's more，some people have to use candles，which leads to another form of pollution
而且，有些人會使用蠟燭，那樣的話會引起另一種形式的污染
高分句型二：
In my opinion，what we should do first is to recycle some wasted things
在我看來，我們首先要做的是回收一些廢舊物品
句型一 which leads to another form of pollution 該句是一個(gè)由which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，which在句中作主語
句型二 what we should do first is to recycle some wasted things 該句是一個(gè)由what引導(dǎo)的主語從句，what在句中作動詞do的賓語

解答 Dear editor，
   I'm glad to write to you to express my idea about the  activity Earth Hour．As we know，our environment is becoming worse and worse．So it's necessary to hold Earth Hour to call on people to protect our envirnoment．（活動目的介紹）
   However，as more and more people take part in Earth Hour，many problems appear．So many people suddenly turning off their lights may affect the normal operation of the grid．What's more，some people have to use candles，which leads to another form of pollution．（高分句型一）
   In my opinion，what we should do first is to recycle some wasted things．（高分句型二）Second，we should plant as many trees as possible．Finally，we'd better live a simple，healthy and sustainable life．（提出建議）
   I really hope our environment becomes better and better．
   Yours faithfully，
   Li Hua

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