【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

When I am a child, I always wished to become an adult so that I could do all that I liked. I wanted to have more space where I was able to follow my own heart without follow my parents’ instructions. As time going by, I have grown up gradual, but I find things are quite different from that I expected. I do have the free to do more things alone. Moreover, I have to take on more responsibilities. I have to take the charge of my life and face challenges bravely. Now I am determined work hard and go to college so that I can have the bright future.

【答案】

【1】am→was

【2】without 后的follow→following

【3】as→with 或者going→goes

【4】gratual→gratually

【5】that→what

【6】free→freedom

【7】Moreover→ However

【8】刪去take the charge of中的the

【9】determined和work中間加 to

【10】the→a

【解析】

試題分析：

【1】am→was考查時(shí)態(tài)。這里根據(jù)句意（當(dāng)我小的時(shí)候。）可知，表示過去的事情，故用一般過去時(shí)，所以am改為was。

【2】without 后的follow→following考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。without是介詞，介詞之后要用動(dòng)詞的-ing形式，所以follow改為iefollowing。

【3】as→with 或者going→goes 考查句子分析。句意：隨著時(shí)間的流逝。這里可以用獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)，變成with time going by或者用完整句子As time goes by。故as→with 或者going→goes都可以。

【4】gratual→gratually 考查副詞。句意：我漸漸長(zhǎng)大。這里要用副詞修飾動(dòng)詞。故gratual要改為gratually。

【5】that→what 考查賓語從句。句意：我發(fā)現(xiàn)事情和我期待的非常不同。這里是賓語從句，引導(dǎo)詞在從句中作賓語；根據(jù)句意，故把that改為what。

【6】free→freedom 考查詞性。句意：我確實(shí)有自由獨(dú)立做更多的事情。這里“自由”作賓語，要用名詞，故free改為freedom。

【7】Moreover→However 考查副詞。句意：然而，我必須要承擔(dān)更多的責(zé)任。根據(jù)句意可知Moreover改為However。

【8】刪去take the charge of中的the 考查固定結(jié)構(gòu)。句意：我必須管理我的生活以及勇敢地面對(duì)挑戰(zhàn)。take charge of管理。

【9】determined和work中間加 to 考查固定結(jié)構(gòu)。句意：現(xiàn)在我決定努力學(xué)習(xí)。be determined to決定做某事，故determined和work中間加 to。

【10】the→a 考查冠詞。句意：現(xiàn)在我決定努力學(xué)習(xí)考上大學(xué)，以便我能有一個(gè)光明的未來。have a bright future表示“有一個(gè)光明的前途”。the表示特指，不符語境。

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