Question

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（^），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon .We didn’t need to do so many homework .Therefore , we have more time with after-school activities .For example , we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day .

My dream school look like a big garden .There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings .We can lie on the grass for a rest , or sat by the lake listening music .The teachers here are kind and helpfully .They are not only our teachers but also our friends .

 

Answer 1

1.They→There

2.didn’t→don’t

3.many →much

4.with→for

5.hour→hours

6.look→looks

7.去掉the

8.sat→sit

9.listening 后加to

10.helpfully →helpful

【解析】

試題分析：在本段中作者描述了自己理想學(xué)校的樣子。他理想的學(xué)校是上午8點(diǎn)半上課，下午3點(diǎn)半放學(xué)，一天只需要上5節(jié)課。學(xué)校里沒(méi)有很多的作業(yè)，因此可以參加很多課后的活動(dòng)。此外，學(xué)校還要像一個(gè)大花園，學(xué)生可以躺草坪上休息，可以聽(tīng)音樂(lè)等。

1.They→There 考查固定句型。They are three lessons in the morning。根據(jù)句意可知此處表達(dá)：上午有三節(jié)課，表示“有”，應(yīng)該是there be 句型，故把They改為T(mén)here。

2.didn’t→don’t考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。We didn’t need to do so many homework。此處敘述每天要做的事情，應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，把didn’t改為don’t。

3.many →much 考查不定代詞。We didn’t need to do so many homework.。many修飾復(fù)數(shù)名詞，如果修飾不可數(shù)名詞homework應(yīng)該用much。

4.with→for考查介詞用法。we have more time with after-school activities。 短語(yǔ)表達(dá)：.have time for sth 或者to do sth意思是“ 有做某事的時(shí)間”，把with改為for。

5.hour→hours 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。we can do reading for one and a half hour。此處one and a half hour意思是“一個(gè)半小時(shí)”，hour應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式。

6.look→looks考查主謂一致。My dream school look like a big garden 。主語(yǔ)是單數(shù)名詞school，根據(jù)主謂一致的原則可知把look改為第三人稱單數(shù)looks。

7.去掉the考查冠詞用法。There are all kinds of the flowers。解題關(guān)鍵：掌握there be 句型的特點(diǎn)，即在there be 句型中名詞均是泛指概念，所以應(yīng)該把the 去掉。

8.sat→sit考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。or sat by the lake listening music。根據(jù)前句內(nèi)容We can lie on the grass for a rest判斷此處是or連接的另一個(gè)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，和lie并列，所以把sat改為sit。

9.listening 后加to�？疾楣潭ǘ陶Z(yǔ)。or sat by the lake listening music。Listen是不及物動(dòng)詞，后面不能跟賓語(yǔ)，固定短語(yǔ)listen to 意思是“聽(tīng)”，所以在listening后加to。

10.helpfully →helpful考查形容詞和副詞。The teachers here are kind and helpfully .涉及知識(shí)：系動(dòng)詞后要跟形容詞做表語(yǔ)，所以把helpfully改為helpful。

考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)。