10.2013年4月20日四川省蘆山縣發(fā)生7.0級地震.最嚴重受災(zāi)地區(qū)99%以上房屋垮塌,受災(zāi)人口152萬.
請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇短文.
①地震發(fā)生的時間、地點和災(zāi)情;
②全國人民對災(zāi)區(qū)給予捐助、送去救災(zāi)物資;救援小組和醫(yī)療專家前往災(zāi)區(qū)搜救生還者.
③作為學生能為災(zāi)區(qū)做些什么.
注意:1.詞數(shù)120左右.
2.可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫.
參考詞匯:7.0級地震 a 7.0-magnitude earthquake;救災(zāi)物資 relief materials.

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息2013年4月20日四川省蘆山縣發(fā)生7.0級地震.最嚴重受災(zāi)地區(qū)99%以上房屋垮塌,受災(zāi)人口152萬.請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇短文,寫作時注意以下幾點:1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個要點:①地震發(fā)生的時間、地點和災(zāi)情;②全國人民對災(zāi)區(qū)給予捐助、送去救災(zāi)物資;救援小組和醫(yī)療專家前往災(zāi)區(qū)搜救生還者.③作為學生能為災(zāi)區(qū)做些什么.2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫.本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài);4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點.
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達:suffer from遭受;What's more而且;As far as we students are concerned就我們學生而言;in urgent need of急需;Besides另外;
On April 20,2013,a 7.0-magnitude earthquake struck the county of Lushan in Sichuan,leaving more than 99% of the houses collapsed in the most severely stricken area and a population of 1,520,000 suffering from the disaster.(高分句型一
What's more,several rescue teams and medical professionals are sent to the areas to search and rescue the survivors.(高分句型二)
We can donate our spare money to the suffering people who are in urgent need of food and medicine.(高分句型三)

解答 On April 20,2013,a 7.0-magnitude earthquake struck the county of Lushan in Sichuan,leaving more than 99% of the houses collapsed in the most severely stricken area and a population of 1,520,000 suffering from the disaster.(高分句型一)
  People across China are offering to make donations.Relief materials and funds are continuously pouring into the quake hit areas.What's more,several rescue teams and medical professionals are sent to the areas to search and rescue the survivors.(高分句型二)
  As far as we students are concerned,we should provide our helping hands for the earthquake stricken compatriots.We can donate our spare money to the suffering people who are in urgent need of food and medicine.(高分句型三)Besides,our spirit support can help the broken hearts overcome the temporary depression.

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題.它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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