【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)( )，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

This afternoon, we hold a class meeting to say goodbye to Zhang Qiang, who was going to study in abroad. In the beginning, he made a briefly speech to express his true love for the class and his wish for everlasting friendship with us. We were all moved to tear. Then came the moment to present him with a special gift, a heart-shaped board with some photos recorded the unforgettable days when we had spent together. Afterwards, we signed out names on his T-shirt expressing his best wishes.

At last, we had a photo taking to record this precious moment. True friendship won't be weakening by distance. We'll surely miss him and we all wish good luck in the future.

【答案】

【1】hold改為held

【2】in改為at

【3】briefly改為brief

【4】tear改為tears

【5】recorded改為recording

【6】when改為that/which

【7】his改為our

【8】taking改為taken

【9】weakening改為weakened

【10】good前面加him

【解析】

【1】hold改為held考察時(shí)態(tài)。文中時(shí)態(tài)為過(guò)去式，所以前后要保持一致。文意是今天下午我們?yōu)閺垙?qiáng)開(kāi)了一個(gè)歡送會(huì)，他將去國(guó)外讀書。

【2】in改為at考察介詞。At the beginning是固定搭配，表示“開(kāi)始”，文意是開(kāi)始的時(shí)候，他做了一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)短的演講表達(dá)他對(duì)班級(jí)的熱愛(ài)和對(duì)友情的祝福。

【3】briefly改為brief考察形容詞。briefly是副詞，修飾動(dòng)詞，而brief是形容詞，表示“簡(jiǎn)潔的”speech是名詞，所以要用形容詞來(lái)修飾。

【4】tear改為tears考察名詞。tear是“眼淚”的意思，是可數(shù)名詞。文意是我們感動(dòng)的都留下了眼淚。

【5】recorded改為recording考察動(dòng)名詞。文意是照片記錄了我們?cè)谝黄痣y忘的日子，所以應(yīng)該用主動(dòng)形式，而不是被動(dòng)形式。

【6】when改為that/which考察引導(dǎo)詞。that/which引導(dǎo)的是定語(yǔ)從句，when引導(dǎo)的是狀語(yǔ)從句。

【7】his改為our考察人稱代詞。文意是我們?cè)谒囊r衫上簽名來(lái)表達(dá)我們最美好的祝福。

【8】taking改為taken考察被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。文意是我們拍了一張照片來(lái)記錄著最美好的時(shí)刻。照片是被拍攝，所以要用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。

【9】weakening改為weakened考察被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。文意是友情不因?yàn)榫嚯x而變?nèi)酢Ｓ亚槭潜幌魅�，所以要用被�?dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。

【10】good前面加him考察人稱代詞。文意是我們都會(huì)想他并祝他好運(yùn)。Wish somebody good luck表示“祝愿某人好運(yùn)”。

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