假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文, 請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文.文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤, 每句中最多有兩處.每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改.

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(∧), 并在其下面寫出該加的詞.

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)戈lj掉.

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞.

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞.

2．只允許修改l0處, 多者(從第ll處起)不計(jì)分.

When an English traveler, who spent a few week in Sweden, was about to return to home, he found he had only enough money left to get a ticket to England. Since it was only two-day voyage, he believed he can get home without eating anything. He final bought a ticket with that little money and went to board the ship. He closed his ears to the sound of the lunch bell or refused to go to the place where people had his dinner when dinnertime came. Therefore, he couldn’t stand this any longer and went to the dining hall, enjoy the last meal on the ship. He then said, “Waiter, brings me the bill.” “Oh, meals are included in the ticket.” said the waiter.

 

1.week → weeks

2.去掉home前to

3.only后加a

4.can → could

5.final → finally

6.or → and

7.dinner前his → their

8.Therefore→ However

9.enjoy → enjoying

10.brings → bring

【解析】

試題分析：本文講述了一個(gè)英國游客的故事。他在國外度假后只剩下買票回家的錢，于是他決定在兩天的旅途中拒絕花錢買飯吃。當(dāng)?shù)搅俗詈笠惶斓臅r(shí)候，他饑腸轆轆，實(shí)在忍受不住，就去餐廳大吃了一頓。當(dāng)吃完找服務(wù)員結(jié)賬時(shí)，才知道原來船上的飯菜都是免費(fèi)的。

1.week → weeks考查名詞。who spent a few week in Sweden。 A few修飾復(fù)數(shù)名詞，故把week改為weeks。

2.home前to 考查介詞。was about to return to home。Home是副詞，前面不用介詞，比如go home。所以去掉to。

3.only后加a 考查冠詞。Since it was only two-day voyage。Voyage是可數(shù)名詞，前面應(yīng)該有冠詞，因?yàn)閠wo是以輔音因素開頭的詞，所以在two-day前面加不定冠詞a。

4.can → could 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。 he believed he can get home without eating anything.。文章是講述過去發(fā)生的故事，全文都用的是一般過去時(shí)，所以把can改為could。

5.final → finally 考查副詞。 He final bought a ticket with that little money。此處是修飾動(dòng)詞bought所以應(yīng)該用副詞，把final改為finally。

6.or → and 考查連詞。He closed his ears to the sound of the lunch bell or refused to go to the place。根據(jù)前后內(nèi)容可知此處是順承關(guān)系，把or改為and。句意：他懂吃飯的鈴聲充耳不聞，并且拒絕去那地方。

7.dinner前his → their 考查代詞。where people had his dinner when dinnertime came.根據(jù)指代一致的原則判斷此處指人們吃飯，所以應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)代詞，把his改為their。

8.Therefore→ However考查副詞。Therefore, he couldn’t stand this any longer。從上下文內(nèi)容可知此處是表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，把Therefore改為However。

9.enjoy → enjoying 考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。 he couldn’t stand this any longer ，and went to the dining hall, enjoy the last meal on the ship. And連接并列成分時(shí)放在最后兩個(gè)詞的中間，由此判斷enjoy不是謂語動(dòng)詞。應(yīng)該是非謂語短語做狀語表示伴隨，改為enjoying。

10.brings → bring考查動(dòng)詞�！癢aiter, brings me the bill.”此處是祈使句，應(yīng)該用動(dòng)詞原形，把brings改為bring。句意：“服務(wù)員，給我把賬單拿來”。

考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)

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