Question

17．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（^）．并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（/）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
      2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分．
One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend，a truck came to a stop besides us．The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through．I stood there and couldn't believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful．The man insisted，so I grateful accepted the offer，thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road．This man might need the umbrella himself，and he preferred to give it to everyone else．It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return．

Answer 1

分析 故事發(fā)生在一個(gè)下雨天，我和朋友中的一個(gè)步行回家．一輛卡車(chē)在旁邊停下．司機(jī)給他們一把雨傘．雖然不相信，但在這個(gè)陌生的司機(jī)堅(jiān)持下，我們接受了．這個(gè)人可能也需要傘，但他卻更喜歡吧它送給其他人． 這讓我明白一個(gè)人做某事是可能不圖任何回報(bào)的．

解答 One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend，a truck came to a stop 
                                                                                   friends            
besides us．The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were
beside                                                                               an                                    
wet through．I stood there and couldn't believein  that a complete stranger is so thoughtful．The 
                                                                                                       was                    
man insisted，so I grateful accepted the offer，thanked him and watched the truck disappear down
                          gratefully
the road．This man might need the umbrella himself，and he preferred to give it to everyone else．It 
                                                                             but                                       someone                
was a lesson to us that it was possible∧give without expect anything in return．
                                                       to                  expecting
1．one of my friends 我朋友中的一個(gè)；one of 后面用名稱復(fù)數(shù)
2．beside 譯"在旁邊"besides 譯"此外"；
3．umbrella[∧]元音；元音音素前用an．
4．believe in 譯"信任"賓語(yǔ)是人活著一種信仰．believe 譯"相信"；
5．was．前后時(shí)態(tài)一致；這是一個(gè)過(guò)去的故事
6．gratefully 副詞修飾動(dòng)詞accept；形容詞修飾名詞．
7．but 轉(zhuǎn)折連詞．本句譯為，這個(gè)人可能也需要傘，但他卻更喜歡吧它送給其他人；
8．everyone每個(gè)人 someone某個(gè)人．一把傘不可能送給每個(gè)人；
9．It is possible to do sth．做某事是可能的；
10 without doing sth．沒(méi)有做某事．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 1．時(shí)態(tài)是改錯(cuò)題必須考查的項(xiàng)目，一般第一句話就可以推斷出，如從One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend，a truck came to a stop 就可以知道這是一個(gè)故事，要用一般過(guò)時(shí)態(tài)
2．并列連詞and （承接）but（轉(zhuǎn)折） or  （或者）（否則）  看清句子的含義就可以