Question

最近我校對高一學(xué)生入學(xué)一學(xué)期后的學(xué)習(xí)生活適應(yīng)情況做了一個(gè)調(diào)查，情況如下。請你用英語表達(dá)下表的調(diào)查結(jié)果，并提出個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。

60%左右的學(xué)生認(rèn)為	40%左右的學(xué)生認(rèn)為	我的觀點(diǎn)
1. 高中學(xué)習(xí)很有壓力； 2. 科目難度大，課后作業(yè)多； 3. 沒時(shí)間參加鍛煉等活動(dòng)	1. 適應(yīng)并喜歡高中生活； 2. 課程更有趣，活動(dòng)更豐富，受益匪淺。	……

要求：    1. 詞數(shù)120；    2. 文章開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：course 課程
Recently, a survey has been carried out in our school whether the freshmen has
become used to the life in senior high school. ­­                                
                                                                               
                                                                               

Answer 1

One possible version:
Recently, a survey has been carried out in our school whether the freshmen has become used to the life in senior high school. As can be seen from the result of the survey, opinions are divided. About 60% of the students in Senior 1 hold the opinion that life in senior high school is far from relaxing. The reasons are as follows: Firstly the subjects they are learning now are obviously more different. Besides, they have to do endless homework after class, which leaves them little time for exercise and other activities.
On the contrary, others say they have become used to the new life and have begun to enjoy it. They say that they find the courses are more interesting and the activities are more colorful, which surely benefit them a lot.
As far as I’m concerned, we should balance our study and other activities and do everything effectively. Only in this way can we learn more and enjoy our life better. 

解析試題分析：寫好圖表式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，寫作首要分析用什么時(shí)態(tài)。本文要求寫一個(gè)高一學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)生活適應(yīng)情況調(diào)查，通常用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。有2個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，用they做主語，和自己的看法用I做主語。注意用一些高級詞匯和短語和以及較復(fù)雜的句式。開頭的變化和句子的連貫性也很重要。最后還要注意字?jǐn)?shù)的控制。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文分三段寫出了高一學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)生活適應(yīng)情況調(diào)查。第一段先概況用了whether引導(dǎo)的同位語從句說明survey的內(nèi)容，結(jié)果As can be seen，是opinions are divided。多數(shù)學(xué)生認(rèn)為壓力大，文中用了Firstly， Besides列出2條原因。which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句是亮點(diǎn)。接下來，用On the contrary,開頭，提出另一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)。become used to the new life and enjoy it。又用了一個(gè)which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句。最后，As far as I’m concerned,提出個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。最后的Only in this way can we learn more and enjoy our life better.倒裝句使用也很恰當(dāng)有力。
考點(diǎn):：圖表類作文。