Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的美國朋友Jack來信說，他暑假后將到北京大學留學。請你根據以下內容給他寫一封回信，告知有關情況。

1．簡單介紹北京大學；

2．生活便利、居民友善；

3．留學期間，愿提供任何幫助。

注意：詞數(shù)100左右：開頭和結尾已經給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Jack，

I glad to know that you will come to China for further study．Now let me tell you what you are concerned with．

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I’m looking forward to meeting you in Beijing．

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jack,

I’m glad to know that you will come to China for further study. Now let me tell you what you are concerned with.

As is known to us, Beijing University is one of the top universities in China, which is famous for its excellent teaching in art and culture. Studying there, you are sure to get improved in every aspect. This is the first time for you to live in a foreign country alone, but yon don’t need to worry about the life there, because it is located in the business center of Beijing. Therefore, it is extremely convenient for you to live there. Besides, most people in Beijing are both kind and hospitable to foreigners.

I’d like to help you find a proper host family nearby the university if necessary.

I’m looking forward to our meeting in Beijing.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇書信寫作。給即將來中國留學的美國朋友Jack一封回信。1.介紹北京大學 2.生活便利體現(xiàn) 3.居民熱情友好4.表達愿意提供幫助。注意覆蓋所有內容要點，適當增加細節(jié)，結構清晰注意書信寫作的格式。時態(tài)：用一般現(xiàn)在時。

【亮點說明】 As is known to us, get improved，等詞組使文章更生動；Therefore，Besides使文章調理更清晰，有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊。As is known to us, Beijing University is one of the top universities in China, which is famous for its excellent teaching in art and culture.使用非限制性定語從句；文章的安排分為三部分，第一部分：寫作目的。第二部分：告知學校和生活的相關情況。第三部分：結尾的敬語。