Question

【題目】假定你叫李華，你的筆友Peter來信詢問你校情況。請根據(jù)下表提示，給他回一封電子郵件。

Location	In the center of the city
Year of building	In 1957
Basic information	beautiful campus；modern teaching facilities sixty classes；about 3,000 students experienced teachers；lively and interesting classes；hard-working teachers
Achievement	educate many students of high quality one of the best schools in the city

注意：

1.開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；

3.詞數(shù)100左右。

Dear Peter,

It’s great to receive your e-mail. _____________________________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

It’s great to receive your e-mail. Now I’d like to tell you something about our school. Our school lies in the center of the city. It was founded in 1957 and has a history of 50 years. Now, there are sixty classes and about 3,000 students in our school. It has a beautiful campus and modern teaching facilities. The teachers in our school are very experienced, and they often make their classes lively and interesting. Also, they all work hard and put their hearts into teaching. Many students of high quality have been educated since the founding of the school. It is now one of the best schools in the city.

I’m sure our school will become more and more beautiful.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本次作文要求筆友Peter來信詢問你校情況，寫電子郵件介紹學(xué)校情況。要點包括：學(xué)校的地理位置、歷史、現(xiàn)狀、教學(xué)設(shè)施和師生情況。

寫作亮點：本篇條理清楚，要點全面，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。其句式上的變化既使得文章生動而流暢，也體現(xiàn)了作者駕馭句式的能力。例如：文章運用了It’s great to do sth.和one of句型；lies in, put their hearts into等詞匯及Now, Also等連接詞。