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假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之問(wèn)交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線( \ )劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Cities, whether big and small, should be clean. Only when we live in a clean city we live a happy life. As we know, a clean city, that disease may be reduced and people’s health may be better, are good both to our mind and body. No one believes people lived in a dirty city with waste everywhere can live happy. However, for more and more people moving into cities, it is not easy to keep our city clean. Beside, some factories still pour out waste into the air, river and onto the ground, making it is hard to keep our city clean. To make our city a better place to live , we still have a lot to do.

【答案】

【1】and改為or

【2】we 前加can/will

【3】that改為where

【4】are改為is

【5】lived改為living

【6】happy改為happily

【7】for改為with

【8】Beside改為Besides

【9】去掉is

【10】live后加in

【解析】

試題分析：文章告訴我們應(yīng)該保持我們所居住的城市的整潔，因?yàn)檎麧嵉某鞘胁趴梢宰屛覀兊纳罡篮谩?/span>

【1】and改為or 考查固定搭配。短語(yǔ)“whether....or.....”不管....還是....；句意：城市，不管大小，都應(yīng)該是很干凈的。

【2】we 前加can/will 考查部分倒裝句。當(dāng)only放在句首，且強(qiáng)調(diào)狀語(yǔ)的時(shí)候，要使用部分倒裝句式，本句中only放在句首，強(qiáng)調(diào)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句when we live in a clean city，所以要在we前面加can/will構(gòu)成部分倒裝句。

【3】that改為where 考查定語(yǔ)從句。本題定語(yǔ)從句的先行詞是a clean city，后面定語(yǔ)從句的結(jié)構(gòu)很完整，所以使用關(guān)系副詞where引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句，并在句中做地點(diǎn)狀語(yǔ)。

【4】are改為is 考查主謂一致。本句的主語(yǔ)是a clean city，這是一個(gè)單數(shù)名詞做主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞要使用單數(shù)形式is。

【5】lived改為living 考查分詞用法。本句中動(dòng)詞live與people構(gòu)成主動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以使用現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)living in a dirty city做定語(yǔ)修飾people。

【6】happy改為happily 考查副詞。在英語(yǔ)中副詞通常做狀語(yǔ)修飾形容詞、副詞或動(dòng)詞；形容詞通常做定語(yǔ)或表語(yǔ)修飾名詞；所以本句中使用副詞happily做狀語(yǔ)修飾動(dòng)詞live。

【7】for改為with 考查with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)。介詞with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)為“with+賓語(yǔ)+賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)”，句意：隨著越來(lái)越多的人搬進(jìn)城市，要想保持城市干凈并不容易。

【8】Beside改為Besides 考查副詞。副詞besides而且，介詞“beside在...旁邊”。句意：隨著越來(lái)越多的人搬進(jìn)城市，要想保持城市干凈并不容易。而且很多工廠還把廢料排進(jìn)河里，空氣中和土里。上下文之間是遞進(jìn)關(guān)系，所以使用besides。

【9】去掉is 考查賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)。本句中it是形式賓語(yǔ)，形容詞hard是賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)，系動(dòng)詞is是多余的。句意：.....讓保持城市干凈很困難。

【10】live后加in 考查動(dòng)詞用法。本句中不定式短語(yǔ)“to live in”作為后置短語(yǔ)修飾place,因?yàn)閘ive是不及物動(dòng)詞，要在后面接介詞in，和place構(gòu)成動(dòng)賓關(guān)系。

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