Question

請你根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。
We often hear people say, “Life is hard!” Faced with difficulties and even failures in life, people’s attitudes are different. Some feel optimistic(樂觀的) while others do not. Do be optimistic in your school life.
注意：①無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語；②除詩歌外，文體不限；③文中不得透露個人姓名和名稱；④詞數(shù)不少于120。
                                                                             
                                                                             

Answer 1

Life has taught me a lot, among which is that we should take an optimistic attitude towards life. When one is optimistic, he often foresees the hopes and actively tries to work out the problem.
There was a time when I was always No. One in the examination praised by teachers and admired by schoolmates. However, things changed when I entered this key school. I found I had great difficulty with my study and was left behind by many students. I got frustrated and felt pessimistic about my future. Luckily, it was at this very moment that my head teacher found this and encouraged me. With his timely help, I made steady progress. To me, life shows its sunshine and smiles again.
Just as a proverb says, “Life is a mirror. If you smile to life, life often smiles to you.” Having the optimistic attitude is the key in life.

試題分析：考查半開放性作文寫作。半開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在保證內(nèi)容要點全部概括的基礎上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進而用自己的語言來表達某種觀點或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達能力。首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮點說明】所給范文語言簡潔，應用了一些較好的詞組和句子：work out 計算出，had great difficulty with 有困難，left behind 落后，With his timely help在他及時的幫助下, Life has taught me a lot, among which is that we should take an optimistic attitude towards life. 這句話用了定語從句， There was a time when I was always No. One in the examination praised by teachers and admired by schoolmates.這句話用了定語從句， it was at this very moment that my head teacher found this and encouraged me. 這句話用了強調(diào)句， Just as a proverb says, “Life is a mirror. If you smile to life, life often smiles to you.” 最后還使用了諺語。