Question

你是李華，你的筆友Jane對于中過的清明節(jié)很感興趣，請你用E-mail的形式給她介紹一下清明節(jié)�？梢园�含以下內(nèi)容：
1. 我國傳統(tǒng)的清明節(jié)已有二千五百多年的歷史，每年的四月四日即是清明；
2. 在這一天，人們回到家鄉(xiāng)，以掃墓，燒紙錢的形式紀念自己的祖先或先烈；
3. 清明節(jié)活動豐富，放風箏，據(jù)說這樣可以免遭疾病或傷害，還可以踏青，郊游，享受美好春光；
4. 這個節(jié)日久盛不衰的原因是清明節(jié)除了表達對祖先的懷念，更多的是親友相聚一堂，提醒大家珍惜現(xiàn)在，關(guān)愛身邊的父母，親人，朋友。
參考詞匯：Tomb-sweeping day清明節(jié)       ancestors祖先        flourishing久盛不衰
注意：可以適當增加細節(jié)以使文章連貫。

Answer 1

Dear Jane,
I’m glad to hear from you again and it’s an honor to introduce “Tomb-sweeping day” to you.
Tomb-sweeping day is a traditional festival of China, which can date back to about 2500 years ago. It is celebrated on 4th,April. (which was originated from approximately zhou dynasty with a history of more than 2500 years.)
On tomb-sweeping day, people will go back to there hometown to express their grief. There is no restriction for people to express the grief. We often burn some paper money to express our missing to our ancestors.
In fact, besides "burning money paper", we can do more, such as we can go for a trip during these sunshine days with our relatives n friends, or have a deep talk after gather again. In some places, Chinese usually fly kites on this day. It is said that in this way people will also be protected from bad luck and disease.
We should treat well to our relatives and friends who are still alive, give them more care and love, besides remember our ancestors.

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