春節(jié)剛過,關(guān)于壓歲錢眾說紛紜,褒貶不一。對此,網(wǎng)上做了一項(xiàng)調(diào)查。
82%的網(wǎng)友認(rèn)為,壓歲錢是春節(jié)重要的傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗之一,代表著長輩對晚輩的美好祝愿,也是孩子們過年的盼望。
18%的參與者認(rèn)為這幾年越給越多的壓歲錢已成為負(fù)擔(dān),而且還成了某些人公然行賄的幌子,對構(gòu)建和諧健康的社會不利。
請你寫一篇調(diào)查報(bào)告,闡述以上觀點(diǎn)并說出自己的看法。開頭已給出。
字?jǐn)?shù)100左右,可適當(dāng)擴(kuò)展。
提示詞:行賄 bribe
Lucky money, good or bad
After the Spring Festival, there arise some hot topics, and lucky money is included as well.
After the Spring Festival, there arise some hot topics, and lucky money is included as well. To collect opinions from the public, an online survey has been made.
82% of the participants regard lucky money as one of the most important traditional customs, representing good wishes from the elderly to the new generation. Besides, lucky money is the most attractive part for children, which forms the good memory of our childhood.    
The rest, however, think badly of it. For one thing, the amount is growing bigger and bigger, making it a heavy load. For another, it has been a good excuse to bribe people in power, which is bad for building a healthy and harmonious society.
Personally speaking, lucky money is nothing wrong. Only when we know its true meaning can we send our hearty wishes to the young.

試題分析:本文屬于陳述正反方觀點(diǎn)的議論文作文,主題是對春節(jié)壓歲錢的不同觀點(diǎn),題目給出了大部分要點(diǎn),也要考生給出自己的觀點(diǎn)。文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,先是一些同學(xué)反對的觀點(diǎn),然后是贊同的觀點(diǎn),最后是自己的觀點(diǎn),要求考生用地道的英語表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn),要求觀點(diǎn)明確,駕馭語言的能力強(qiáng),選擇詞匯的時候要選擇相對高級的詞匯,也要運(yùn)用多種句型,讓文章更有變化。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達(dá)文章需要的意思,可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實(shí)現(xiàn)同樣的目的。在寫作的時候要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞把要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來,使文章成為一個整體。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,觀點(diǎn)明確,有不少好句子和短語:regard… as“認(rèn)為…是”, think badly of “對…評價(jià)不高”,Personally speaking“就個人而言”, lucky money is the most attractive part for children, which forms the good memory of our childhood. 這句話用了非限制性定語從句, the amount is growing bigger and bigger, making it a heavy load. 這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做結(jié)果狀語,it has been a good excuse to bribe people in power, which is bad for building a healthy and harmonious society.這句話用it做形式主語和非限制性定語從句, Only when we know its true meaning can we send our hearty wishes to the young.這句話用了倒裝句。還有這篇文章還使用了:Besides, For one thing, For another,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞,使文章更加連貫。
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