Question

“百善孝為先"是中國(guó)人的傳統(tǒng)美德。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，談?wù)勀銓?duì)“孝”的理解。
提示：

1．你認(rèn)為“孝”是什么?
2．以你自己或身邊人的事例說(shuō)明。
注意：
1．文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)人總詞
2．文中不得透露個(gè)人和學(xué)校信息；
3．詞數(shù)1 20左右；
4．參考詞匯：孝順filial piety
It is universally accepted that filial piety is an important virtue in China．                        
                                                                                    
                                                                                       

Answer 1

It is universally accepted that filial piety is an important virtue in China. It means respecting and caring for parents and the elderly.?
　　Take my parents for example. After my grandma died last year, my parents spent much  time chatting with my grandpa, accompanying him on walks and cooking him delicious food. At first, my grandpa seemed to be happy about it, but as time went by, he became uneasy, because he was not used to leading so comfortable a life. Therefore, my parents encouraged him to attend some activities in our community. They also encouraged him to go to a drawing class in a school for the old, which gave my grandpa a great sense of achievement. He became happy again.
　　My parents set a good example to me. In my opinion, the real filial piety is giving the old what they really need.?

試題分析：考查半開(kāi)放性作文寫(xiě)作,開(kāi)放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并簡(jiǎn)單的要點(diǎn)提示。要求考生自由發(fā)揮，對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成半開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先涵蓋要點(diǎn)，還要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章使用了很好的短語(yǔ)和句子： Take … for example“拿…舉例”，be used to doing“習(xí)慣于做…”， so comfortable a life“這么舒服的生活”，. Encourage sb. to do鼓勵(lì)某人做…，set a good example to “為…樹(shù)立榜樣”，After my grandma died last year, my parents spent much  time chatting with my grandpa, accompanying him on walks and cooking him delicious food. 這句話用了非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞， They also encouraged him to go to a drawing class in a school for the old, which gave my grandpa a great sense of achievement.這句話用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句， In my opinion, the real filial piety is giving the old what they really need.這句話用了賓語(yǔ)從句。